Reviews for Obstructed Views
Msdib chapter 1 . 7/2
Great story! I wish I had one more chapter where Vance had to own up to how good Tony did and a scene with Gibbs and Tony. But a very entertaining story! Love the Mounties!
Aunt Giggler chapter 14 . 5/11
Nice end note to Canadians. Wonderful touch. I live in Michigan & I lived in Florida. I have also met a number of Canadians. I also have liked a great many. They are nice people &I some of them are so funny because they ARE like the stereotypes we hear about. Our upper peninsula Michiganders are so similar to Canadians I wonder if we ever had a disagreement with Canada whose side they would agree with?. As per other reviews I have sent, nice work. Please keep it up. I look forward to more writings from you in the future.
Aunt Giggler chapter 11 . 5/11
Keep up the great job. Doing a fine job. Looking forward to the next chapter. I am impressed beyond words how captivated I am by this story.

Ssshhhhhh. I have never told any writer in any fanfic the things I have written to you referring to this story. Again Probie nice job so far.
Aunt Giggler chapter 10 . 5/11
I am extremely engrossed in this story. I cannot wait to read the next page; next paragraph; heck the next word! I really appreciate & love it he fact that you are using the character's television personalities & relationships w/each other. I do not think I have ever read a fanfic where the writer has done such a great job keeping the characters true to the show. My only peeve is the few spelling/grammar errors slow my reading. My last thing to say is: well done Probie! Kudos!
dinozzolover29 chapter 18 . 2/7
I hope eventually you'll post again, you're writing is pure magic!
6of7 chapter 18 . 2/5
Are you still going to write a sequel?
FynnAdair chapter 18 . 10/6/2017
this is amazing! I started with the pre-series and then switched to this one :)
Some of Tony's thought and interactions with others are hilarious. I love your stories so far and am looking forward to any and all updates and sequels!
Ghostwriter chapter 18 . 8/20/2017
Awesome work. Love it.
NickTonyK chapter 18 . 3/2/2017
Just a masterpiece of writing! I loved every bit of itand yes, the Mounties were cool! TonyVance at the conference? Couldn't be more fun! Thank you for writing and for your amazing storytelling.
AlaskanFan chapter 18 . 1/17/2017
WOW! That was a fabulous story!
Ch 1-3 - absolutely brilliant humor - Leon trying to appear that he was in control of Gibbs; Tony taking down the fraud; priceless
Ch 5 - Masterful Tony-in-control
Ch 6-18 - Good use of humor - especially with the Mounties. Gripping action. Great craziness. Terrific team/family dynamics.

Alex C chapter 14 . 9/1/2016
As a Canadian, may I just say that I have actually seen a group of Mounties burst randomly into O Canada and it is amazing. This made me laugh, and I could totally see it coming. That is one thing about Canadians, we love to poke fun, especially at ourselves. And yet at the same time, fiercely patriotic. Don't know how that works lol
bleeb90 chapter 18 . 8/19/2016
This fic was absolutely beautiful, and I am glad I read it. Thanks for sharing this with us, readers. And how I loved Vance's observations, and the Mounties.
Guest chapter 18 . 8/14/2016
Wait what happens to Dr. Helen? WTF? Oh well I have to leave it to my imagination then. Great story with Tony in the strong lead. I love these! Wish it happened on the show. But that's why we have fan fiction! Yay!
CharlieLittle chapter 18 . 7/3/2016
Loved this story - great job.. I think tony is just great and you completely got him in this one :)
I couldn't find a sequel though - is there a sequel? Will there be a sequel? Please let there be a sequel! I need more - Pleease ;)
Singing Silverwings chapter 18 . 5/14/2016
What a lovely, interesting and enjoyable story! I love Tony being in control. Vance was completely buffaloed by him! LOL Quite nice!
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