|Reviews for The Sun Always Rises|
| Minirowan chapter 1 . 1/5
This was really good. I'd love to read more. The thought of Ryohei dead is really depressing, but it seems to be the only way for Kyoko to become the Sun Guardian. You did a great job with her.
I was a bit surprised to see them grow up and go through the Milliefiore debacle. That was a bit of a twist since I was expecting them to travel into the future.
| rayningnight chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
I think I half understood this.
Up until the point where they 'continued on' through high school and university, I loved this. Then everything kinda got confusing, since... whatever happened to Rerborn? And the Varia? The rest of the Acrobaleno? Really, though this was really really really good, you seemed to have pushed away a heck of a lot of the characters.
Like... was Lambo ever even mentioned?
Anyway, again, though confusing, this was a treasure read, what with its originality and stuff. I don't think I've ever read a story wit Kyoko as a Guardian, and for A Want of A Nail fic, this was an awesome idea.
| Crow667 chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
would be awesome if there was a full fledged story of this but wait...is haru the storm guardian? how? what about lambo? how will the time travel work without lambo? how did haru survived against the varia? hm i liked adult lambo. wahteves thanks for the fic keep up the good work!
| minekoanime chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
very, very amazing
| Chachachachachachachachachacha chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
This is a very interesting AU! I like how some things change but some things stay the same. Great job! :)
| The Other Problem chapter 1 . 4/20/2013
It's so sad and happy at the same time and Kyoko's just AMAZING! I just love her simplicity and the innocence she retains even though she becomes very involved with the mafia. Everyone else was done incredibly well, too. This is beautiful.
| Nitmi chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Awesome! Pura Vida!
| CrazyAce'n'PokerFace chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
fascinating look at what-could-have-been - and it all fits together so well. i loved it. :)
| KawaiiNekoNami chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
It's always hard to find a fic in where Kyoko is being shown to be respected by the writers... :) I can't help but wanted to say 'Thank you!' for creating this wonderful story because well... it's such a beautiful story... About on why Tsune needed Kyoko, who is his sun that shine brightly for him(It doesn't matter even if Ryohei is alive, she's still his sun! :D)
| FairoNeko chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
This is so... Real...
| bells-mannequin chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
Such a beatiful story. I loved about everything in it. This Kyouko-this would have been one I would have loved to see in canon! :)
Very well done!
| tigrun chapter 1 . 8/31/2012
love it so is tsuna really dead ?
| Desired Dreams-XS8018 chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
This just blew my mind, and I wish it wasn't a one shot.
It's, it's so interesting and everything is so believable, I loved that you have Kyoko developed as a character in this, when in canon there is very little of this. I want to read the rest of the TYL arc in your version now ahaha
Bonus points for making Haru fight as well
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/13/2012
Beautiful piece of work. I found you through TV Tropes! Please keep writing!
| synonymsforempathy chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Very poignant. A wonderful retelling that isn't just jammed down our throats. Very, very believable.
I cried at the end. This has really endeared Kyoko to me. You have managed to make alternate scenes with the same characterization.