|Reviews for Surrender|
| Kinsutenekochan chapter 6 . 4/8
I LOVE IT! Oh this was soooo good! I really like how you portrayed everyone and love the plot! Awesome! Keep it up amd Thank you!
| Guest chapter 6 . 9/25/2014
I love love LOVE this! I just have to know how you always figured Misao and Aoshi would react to Kaoru and Kenshin making up after the Oniwanbun worked so hard for four years to keep her and Kenji hidden. Would they be mad? Or happy she is happy?
| TOSoldtimer chapter 6 . 9/14/2014
It's a nice story, very well written. But in real life, I don't think four years of stalking by a violent, controlling and possessive man would have ended well.
| A Midsummer chapter 6 . 9/6/2014
Lol I know I wasn't suppose to laugh but the misunderstanding that festered for years just can't help but be hilarious.
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/21/2014
HEY GENIAL ESTEEE SI NO COMENTE LOS DEMÁS CAPIS FUE POR PROBLEMAS TEGNICOS NO POR QUE NO ME GUSTARA LA HISTORIA JAJA AL FINAL TODO SALIO BIEN AUNQUE KENSHIN Y SU ACTITUD MUY MISTERIOSA Y CONTROLADORA YA ME ESTABA ASUSTANDO JEJE PERO FUE MUY EMOCIONANTE LEER TODO LASTIMA QUE FUE TAN POQUITO HAA
| Guest chapter 6 . 7/20/2014
hoo casi me matan de un infarto a esto es... a sin palabras con algunas lagrimillas y mejor me las seco antes que me electrocute
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/20/2014
hee si ya e me esta asustando kenshin
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/20/2014
hay esto si me intriga
| Traveling Muse chapter 6 . 6/9/2014
You create some terrific aus. Please make more in the future
| Lockon chapter 6 . 4/23/2014
Damn. Kenji just made the scene so cute and heartwarming. T u T
| hitokori midnight chapter 6 . 3/28/2014
PLEASE UPDATE OR I WILL SEND TURNIPS TO YOUR HOUSE AND MAKE YOU EAT THEM !
| sapphire-amythest chapter 6 . 1/29/2014
I love the story! Oh my gosh I was clasping my heart towards the end -figuratively speaking-. Thank you for writing this. Really enjoyed it!
| UrmixMoonstone chapter 6 . 12/23/2013
So good *sob sob sob*
| Tsukiko Saito chapter 6 . 12/23/2013
This is the second time I read the story (I apologized that I didn't wrote my comment back then... I was a little lazy to log-in...haha) Anyway, overall the story is both cute and heart-warming. The climax of the story seems open-ended, although I am satisfied by the way how you end the story.
Having a sequel is intriguing but I like the story as the way it is.
I like the personality of Kenshin here, being devoted, (sometimes possessive), protective and caring individual to Kaoru and (recently) their son. It made me want to squeak with "moeness"! And the way, how you describe the actions of the characters, urged me to read for more!
Kaoru is a bit OC here, due to the fact that she has not accept the past life (more like present life) of Kenshin. Truth be told, I am a bit pissed at our raven-haired protagonist, of how she treated to her determined lover (at the finale of the story). On the other hand, it's quite common to be angry, after all that has happened to you (being hunted down by a possessive lover, not having him to tell you the truth in the first place and your lover being as an assassin). That's just my opinion, though.
You also have a slight issues with grammar but it's fine with me. I wished you wrote the story a bit longer of how Kenshin, Kaoru and Kenji live a life as a family. In any case, thank you for a writing a wonderful story.
| Tsunderemoe chapter 6 . 11/28/2013
Gosh! I simply loved the moment when Kenshin and Kenji hug. So heart-warming Thanks for writing a great fanfic!