|Reviews for Watching over|
| janzen222 chapter 7 . 7/16/2012
i showed my friend this story and hes mad cause you didn't continue he yelled something about 'forcing you to write more' but i was wondering if this story was up for adoption because if so I would like to take a crack at it and hopefully shut his complaining up take a look at my writings then send me a message thanks
| Still Not Dead Yet chapter 7 . 11/10/2011
If they meet like that its no wonder he holds on Gamma-chan the way he does.
As always I look forward to your next update!
| Joannie chapter 6 . 10/1/2010
Please update soon causie its a very good story and i want to know whats going to happen next
| jones chapter 6 . 6/17/2010
This is a very good story and I cant wiat to see if you right more.
| afallenheart chapter 6 . 6/2/2010
Please update as soon as possible! PLEASE!
| nine-orcids chapter 6 . 5/26/2010
love this story! can't wait for the next chapter!
| buzzbumble chapter 6 . 5/5/2010
Your story is pretty good, a few spelling mistakes but nothing s little proof reading wouldn't help to fix.. The pervy sage is acting like a lazy knob! Sheez minato would be dissappointed in his lax attitude when he didn't come back after the oro mission... Speaking of which where is kask in this? What was the mission that rin died on? Why didn't the third kicked them out of rins appartment?
| Still Not Dead Yet chapter 6 . 5/4/2010
Jiriya kicking ass! My chibi in my head is doing a dance!
| Still Not Dead Yet chapter 5 . 4/26/2010
I was wondering what would happen to Rin but dam that sucks
| PruCan4evar chapter 5 . 4/26/2010
This is getting more sadder every chapter. This story clearly explains what went on before Naruto joined the academy.
| Still Not Dead Yet chapter 4 . 4/23/2010
That doesn't leave you with a sense of foreboding at all..
I love how this story fills in so many gaps in Naruto and I look forward to your next update!
| Silvermane1 chapter 3 . 3/29/2010
cool please continue
| naginator chapter 2 . 3/22/2010
interesting story, is jirayia gonna raise naruto now and whats gonna happen to the villagers, look forward to another update
| noradiana chapter 2 . 3/22/2010
I love this story! Please!please! Continue! Dont stop! Dont even think about it! This story is great!
| hihirainshere chapter 2 . 3/22/2010
( Kushina died... I'm waiting to see how Jiraya works things out, good job with this story and good luck for future updates.