Reviews for The Overnight Trip
aria chapter 4 . 11/17/2014
Wow this is good. Totally in character... how can u stop now ?
cutechibilolita chapter 4 . 8/17/2014
This is really good thumbs up! I can't wait for the next chapter :) update soon please.
Kyondria chapter 4 . 7/31/2014
This is good! Amazing writing, kept me enthralled all the way :) Please update! It's been awhile since I've read a good fanfic of one of my fav couples.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/19/2014
EVIL EVIL EVIL! Who does this to a fandom! Noe one likes endless things :( *killed my dreams*
animexpercy chapter 4 . 4/26/2014
Why cliffhanger why!
fiestybellpepper chapter 4 . 4/2/2014
OMG WHY WAS THIS LEFT UNFINISHED AND WHY AM I FINDING IT 4 YEARS LATER
Clove15 chapter 4 . 3/16/2014
Oh this is getting spicy!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/19/2013
moar plzz!
Moongrl088 chapter 3 . 6/5/2013
Any chance for an update? It's a sweet alternative to the manga!
animeaddict787 chapter 1 . 4/2/2012
I liked it :" This is a plot that I would really love to read, since sometimes I do wonder what if Asami and the rest didn't barge in : :)) Pleaase update :D
AyuTsukasa chapter 3 . 2/23/2012
i just wanna say your writing is awsome good job. some of the stories here make me wonder if peoplw read what they write before they post it. anyway ur awsome keep it up :3
Nymphadora1506 chapter 3 . 12/21/2011
:) that says it all...
Clove15 chapter 1 . 6/27/2011
cute.
kat chapter 3 . 3/14/2011
this is :) :) :) :) :) :)
seasaltchocolate chapter 3 . 3/11/2011
Wow... its very well written, which i admit, i didn't expect. (Some of the citrus out there makes me gag, its so badly written...) so please, update! :)
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