|Reviews for May and His December|
| Zynda chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Wow. That was delightful and sad. Or delightfully sad, as the case may be. Either way, a wonderful, definitely different, and thoroughly well written piece. Thank You!
| Crispy Anakin chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
It started out like I was reading crack but I ended teary eyed. Why are you so talented? Fantastic job as always.
| jasperFiend chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
AW THIS COULD HAVE BEEN SO OOGY BUT YOU PULLED IT OFF SO WONDERFULLY, BELLA SNARKY AND EDWARDS SNARKINESS WAS PRICELESS, ITS 11ISH HERE THE HOUSE IS ASLEEP BUT I WOULD HAVE WAKED THEM ALL UP WITH MY LAUGHING BUT I GOT A GRIP.
WONDERFUL JOB WONDERFUL STORY
| Demosthenes91 chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Ohmigod you're gonna make me cry at karaoke! I should know better than to read any of your stuff when I'm in my period - I'm far too emotional as it is and then you go with all your fucking brilliance, pushing all my buttons...
you suck...like, in the best way ever.
Of course I loved it, as if I wouldn't. Besides the absolution that they bring one another, I like this take on Alice - how she struggles with slowly becoming a 'normal' vampire and trying to prove herself. I love the snark in Bella and how that's her version of a shield. And Edward - geez. Nothing but bad choices and he lost his chance.
Absolution. It's beautiful and sad and you just kill me every damn time.
Gah! HAPPY NOW?
| Fai'sKay chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
SHE MARRIED MIKE NEWTON? Fuck, Poor Bella. Her life must have been miserable. I loved this story. Bella and Edward are so sweet together, even if she is an old woman. Loved it.
| 404 Account Removed chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
I adore this, so much, It's actually my favorite fic from now on. I love how you made it out of the norm and put the right amount of humor, regret, nostalgia, and deep feeling into it. You're fantastic, and this just might have made my night.
| StacyRenaud chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
OMG.. This was funny and sweet in its own disturbed little way. Well Played!
| gxtgal chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Wow, what a beautiful story! I haven't read anything like it. OH, how I wish they had a time machine so they could GO BACK in time and be together. Loved it!
| ponderer chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
This was most excellent. And although it wasn't in the realm of the books, it stayed true to character and could have been a great "what-if".
| NoWayWithWords chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
WOW! This was an absolutely wonderful, hilarious yet poignant story. I laughed until I nearly cried, and then I legitimately cried.
Please, please keep writing your stories (I loved "We Were Nomads Bathed in Concrete" SO much, and I would practically give my hardcover set of the Twilight Saga for you to finish IVO... it has been one of my all-time top favorite fanfics!)
| sakari-x chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
An fantastic story, laughed and cried. Bella was amazing and Edward was too funny. Loved every bit of it!
| La.Tua.Cantante.83 chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Aw... I'm sorta sad now. It's sweet, but makes me sad about the loss. Interesting plot.
| kay.I.R22 chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
aw that is so sweet! a unique change to they typical bella/edward stories! i liked it alot!
| M-isforPigtails chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Aw... Lovely story.
| ISparkleOnMyOwn chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
mozart-goes-emo. **rolling on floor laughing unable to breathe planning to make myself a t-shirt that says "mozart goes emo"** in black )
and i like this bella. she doesn't take stuff too seriously, she's funny and sarcastic. and you made clear that she's an old woman so i didn't have to wonder when/how they'd end up together.
my mind is still trying to find a way though. what does a vampire look like when he/she was turned at age 70?
i didn't like this alice that much. although she's not the bouncy shopping-addict she's in some stories, i never liked the whole i-found-a-mate-for-you thing. makes it sound like edward can't get a girl without help. but then i guess, someone had to make him invite girls for christmas at the cullens') it's about the same for esme.
the idea of bella being an old woman itself is pretty cool. different, yes, but we've already had so many bella-and-edward-meet-in-high-school-stories.
rose is really cool here. she's annoyed and bitchy, but, hey, she has every reason to. emmett hunting elephants-would love to see a picture of that. and of Emo-Mozart of course.
i don't think i can leave a review for "We were Nomads bathed in Concrete" anymore, but, again, I love it. Read it 5 or 6 times by now.
and, um, any major grammatical errors up there, i'm not stupid (at least not completely). english isn't my first language. i'm trying )