I really enjoyed this story! The character development was fantastic! I think I liked Draco the best, but Sirius was truly likeable there in the end!

I don’t know why but the ides of Vincent and Greg commiserating over the whiny and dramatic Malfoy is oddly hilarious and sweet to me

Harry finally uttered the only appropriate phrase that came to mind.

"I hate you."

I would, too.
Great story! I like it.

I really hate Snape for good cruelty right about now
The author has done a good job making Snape’s past actions and seems deeply unlikable

They went to school together for 7 years. They are friends, obviously intimate friends. Despite all that, he does not know that she is Muggle born and she does not know that he hates Muggles and supports Voldemort‘s ideology? Were they ever talking with each other? This scenario is highly unlikely.

I also wonder why Snape turned spy. He still seems to harbour the same pureblood prejudice. Otherwise he would not think that he is the one to forgive but that it is the other way around - that he‘s the one who has to beg for forgiveness. For being a total jerk in the first place.

This was an interesting fic. It wasn’t for me, but will appeal to people who like this kind of characterization.

Have re-read this. Thanks for posting it and leaving it up after your departure.

There are good and glitchy moments, but I must laud your having Snape figure out in chapter 32 - despite his hatred for Black - that Black couldn't have been looking to harm HP: he'd had too much opportunely private time with the kid before any adult knew he was there. In the same chapter, you uniquely had Scabbers caged for protection from Crooks. No other fic I've read used that simple ploy. Kudos for both!

This was a wonderful read, thanks for sharing!

good sor

all about that she chose james potter over him makes me laugh. I mean, like she had a choice. what did he expect? beg to him like winky did when crouch threw her out?
and how can't he know about her blood status? they're same year at hogwarts and what you wrote so far-about lily scolding james for bullying snape at school-they must have been close, and he didn't know that?
i wonder what turned him to be spy this rime. I mean, so far he obviously didn't regret calling her mudblood or change his mind about blood purity...

is this a joke? i mean, what did he expect? accident or not calling mudblood in front of whole school like the cannon is bad enought, but intentionlly insult her and threw her out and expect her to keep loving him?

? he's ridiculous he's the one who threw her out

Did a reread - again - still lovin' it!

i love this, perfect!

Wow...this was just...wow. The story, the way you wrote it, how you kept the characters pretty on point...this is just amazing!