Aww I really like it so far! Can't wait to see where the story goes from here.

Hark, hark ye demons of youth and beauty, begone! You know I'm totally going to picture your waiter for this, right? Even though by his coloring he's all Newtony.

3 I love it that you're writing again.

Hey there.. long time no see.

Loved the new story. Um I believe I like your Shalloward...I assume that was Bella he served coffee to.. LOL

Yes I do miss Balticward.. please give him and his Bella a hug..

-)

Update soon.

Yikes. Edward seems pretty douchey... but something about him makes me want to give him a chance. Great start!

I am so glad you are writing again! Or I guess posting again :). This was lovely, I have missed your style and I am looking forward to undesrtanding more about Bella and seeing if (or better when) Edward realizes that he is more than he thinks he is :). I hope your life is a bit brighter now than it was a few months ago. Thanks again for posting this I really look forward to next chapter.

Have you thought of doing an outtake or something like that for The Mirrors? I have missed Teddy :).

So, how old is Bella here? Interesting beginning.

I'm so glad to see you post something. I've missed you :)

~Susan

hm, parents who act like parents and a boy with marginal capacity to learn a lesson-how unique! can't wait to see where you lead us!

Interesting... I look forward to seeing where it goes.

I've missed you and your stories SO MUCH! Seriously my days have been lonely without Balticward, and his possesive nature. LOl

Glad to see your back, and I really liked this chapter too. Will we be seeing a much older Bella?

As much as I love Balticward...and trust me...I love him.

I talk about him often, I think you should really keep it to yourself and try to get it sold as a screenplay.

It would make an incredible movie.

You really should.

Nice start. I'm definitely interested in where it goes. I wonder what other tips she'll have in store for him? Looking forward to whatever you've got planned. :)

Seems like a great start. Glad to see you're writing another story. Looking forward to some more Shalloward.

You're one of my favorite fanfic authors and I'm so excited you are starting a new story.

I'm terribly missing Balticward and Savetheworldsper..can't wait to read more on them either ;)

liking this a lot already! (i was just looking at your profile earlier today, wondering if you had an ETA for the return of balticward, and lo and behold you've got a new story.)

hip hip HOORAY!

YOUR BACK!

all is well in my world right now : )

haven't read the chapter yet.

just wanted to say hooray for you and your fabulous storytelling.

cheers!

db