Interesting progress!

I’m curious about her story as well!

That was an interesting lesson for him!

just maybe he is growing up.

What an intriguing beginning!

This story was moving in a way I cannot really articulate. Edward’s arc and how he was written was remarkable and believable.

Idk, Yeah, Edward is shallow, but Bella is also condescending as heck? Kiddo is so incredibly rude, and these tips might help, but also maybe try some conversation?

It would be nice to know if they made it. :-)

I’ve been the younger woman with the older man which isn’t much better than this but what I know to be true is when friends/family on both sides of the relationship disrespect your relationship or the person you have to “protect” your choice not defend it. On both sides here people in their lives have been rude and unkind and if you don’t nip it, it continues. The question is will these two be strong enough to see it through? I don’t know, Edward is sweet but he seems young not stupid (Victoria is a bitch!). And he needs to move out of his parents house even if it’s a roommate situation. It helps with the adult mindset.

I felt Esme was really rude the last chapter but this one bothered me. Edward didn’t play well and why do you keep making Bella unattractive and having Edward point it out in his mind? The. What’s the point? Edward is 24 sure but he needs to grow up. Sigh. Yeah this chapter was tougher then the whole story for some reason . I feel foe Bella in this but I guess Bella’s friends will be brutal too.

Well I will say early on I said in a review she is a writer, psychologist or teacher. In a way she’s all three. Finally!

Yeah I love playing “who done it” so to speak but I can see why Edward is frustrated and angry. I definitely think she’s been in costume this whole time.

Wow you paint a sad physically blah picture of Bella like she’s wallpaper and I find her fascinating but I guess you want her to look frumpy. Hmm...It would be cool if she worked for the NSA or FBI for cyber security and was in costume this whole time looking older than she is. But I guess we’ll wait for your reveal.

So I assume Carlisle and Esme never got Edward tested while experiencing that real estate boom. Sounds like he might have a learning disability. Also are you ever going
to tell us Bella’s age or is she just meant to be his muse and we only know her job and kid?

So how old is Bella? Grey hair and a mom but clearly not her whole story. Is this a B/E HEA? I like the concept of Bella seeing him so clearly. Is she a writer, teacher or a psychologist. Observation seems to be her talent.