|Reviews for Crimson eye's still cry|
| MidnightSakuraBlossom and SYD chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
Who killed who? What's the girl's name? It's kind of confusing! But I guess it was alright. That poem seemed far more dramatic and tragic to me! Can I suggest a real story with Sasori that maybe tells who this girl is that leads up to this? Just a suggestion!
P.S. Is it me or does Sasori kind of look like Gaara?
| UnknownReaper chapter 1 . 3/4/2010
poem, what shall i say?
If its your first time here, its not bad but it needs work.
You are having problems portraying your iconic image properly. You must make it more descriptive and allow more imaginative volcabulary. Its to literal.