|Reviews for Restoration|
| Judy chapter 20 . 6/22/2013
I love this story and hope that you will one day return to fish it.
| Isala Uthenera chapter 20 . 11/6/2012
love reading about maebh can t wait for next update
| Guest chapter 20 . 7/9/2012
Well this was a lousy place to leave us hanging. I have thoroughly enjoyed the story of "Maybe" and then throwing in Renaud and stopping makes me so sad! I realize it's been more than a year, however, if Sagacious Rage ever decides to finish it, I'd be more than happy to read it!
| naomis8329 chapter 20 . 5/14/2011
Ok lol, I'm done. Please, please tell me that they will get together? They are so right for each other. What a pairing this would be. He cares for her and she for him and why couldn't they marry? He's from a "good" family and it would not be frowned on, look at Fergus and Eamon they married "foreigners".
I do hope you decide to continue this as it is a wonderful story, full of love, family and hope. Maybe deserves happiness herself, her own family and those to love as well as her sister, father and brother-in-law.
Thank you so much for these wonderful stories. I look forward to further instalments.
| AndmeJull chapter 20 . 4/1/2011
I love Renaud. No, really, he's awesome. I do hope Maebh will end up being in a long, beautiful relationship with him. I am a sucker for some fluffy.
Awesome story, btw. I found it a bit late, but I'm glad I did. Update soon and make us all happy? *puppy eyes* :)
| Rosabell chapter 20 . 3/31/2011
It's a bit difficult to like Anora very much when she's so inflexible about appearances. On the other hand, there's a certain level of trust that is required when requesting someone like Maebh, who grew up in the Circle for much of her life, to appear every day for festivities with the higher class and risk losing face. She's very ill-bred about it though, surprisingly so; one would expect Anora to show more humility given that Maebh's presence in these events is more for Anora's benefit than for her own. I always did find Anora in the game to lack a vital charisma that would have made all the harping about how intelligent she supposedly was to be very…unbelievable. She's never shown herself to be all that smart; she's shown herself to be narrow-minded and crafty on immediate issues, quick on her feet and yet very unwise, which would do well for a lackey on wall street but isn't believable in a ruler of a great kingdom. In all fairness, Anora didn't have a lot of opportunities to show her competence in the game; all the game could do was tell us she was good, not show us, but she reminds me more of a high school cheerleader president from Mean Girls messing around with shallow intrigue that just happened to involve titles, rather than a true queen with authentic dignity and farsightedness. As she is, she would have made a poor queen, one more befitting of an ostentatious kingdom like France during King Louis the XIV's reign. Of course, her character's already been written, so we can't do much about that, but it is interesting seeing how you work with her fundamentally unrealistic character. Bioware's also done a poor job of depicting nobles to have any political wisdom. They're all concerned with babies…ugh. That's a pretty big issue, true, but it's not so big that it trumps everything else. One would think these nobles would worry a little bit about things like the economy, for example, the food supply, reconstruction, health care, general population, all these things that were affected by the blight…no one cares if the king has an heir when there's no freaking FOOD or MONEY .
Anyway, rant aside about bioware (and I love bioware, I think they made some great games and this is just nitpicking) please update :D I wonder if something will happen between Maebh and Anders. I always found him more intriguing than Alistair, personally, but of course, you are the master of your story. Have I mentioned I love this fic yet? I haven't. I love this fic. Please update soon!
| valiasedai chapter 20 . 2/23/2011
I love the ending. XD
| NuitNuit chapter 20 . 2/23/2011
We can't do that again, eh? Somehow I do not believe it and I call lying liar who lies!
Great update. Glad they finally did the deed. Of course, now we have to wait and see what happens now that they are out of the...closet (yes, I went there).
| JackOfBladesX chapter 20 . 2/23/2011
wow, she's been walking around with injuries for a VERY long time now. She'll probably feel like a million bucks after Anders finished his healing. Wonder what you'll do with Nate.
Daughter of Lohgain and Son of Rendon Howe. Hope to see more soon.
I'll also be interested to see your version of Justice.
Anyway, good luck.
| mutive chapter 20 . 2/23/2011
Oh, hot closet sex. Always fun! ;)
I totally love Anders hitting on Maebe. He would, wouldn't he, the letch? ;) And Alistair fleeing from Loghain is most cute.
| DarkMage6 chapter 20 . 2/23/2011
She's right. . . She shouldn't do it again with him. . . Anders however. . .lol
loved the chapter!
| jasper chapter 19 . 2/6/2011
This entire story is quite enchanting! I especially love your Zevran. When I read his lines I hear them in his voice. Thank you!
| NuitNuit chapter 19 . 1/19/2011
Ok first off this:
"I wish you didn't have to go," he said, heavy with regret. "What was it that Cailan wanted to do with you?"
Maebh's insides turned to stone. "Are you out of your mind?" She pulled away and resumed packing. "I told you we couldn't do that anymore."
I totally snorted :) Oh silly Maebh.
Now onto the other stuff, love the introduction of a new assassin guild. Intrigues in intrigues. Always a good thing imho :)
The stuff with Mhari has me gearing up for a 'rocks fall, all die' moment btw.
| Lanali chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
This is awesome!
| DarkMage6 chapter 19 . 1/18/2011
YAY! Anora is okay! And so is the baby! Woot! Woot!