Reviews for Running for Home
Guest chapter 8 . 6/27 this what you think real people act like? Edward is clingy, Bella is emotionally unstable, and they're both probably the most immature, annoying characters I have ever come across.
Guest chapter 14 . 6/21
I'd like to know what Edward thinking when become so touchy feely with Bella.
I mean at first he didn't even go near then one night he's touching her and rubbing his face on her and even cupping her arse.
I mean what happened. I know couchgate... but how did that trigger anything in Edward?
michigangal0223 chapter 28 . 2/19
haha to funny
michigangal0223 chapter 26 . 2/19
enjoyed reading
ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 31 . 11/24/2014
Loved it! Great work! I'm glad you added the extras! I was wondering what Charlie said to Edward on the phone lol.
flecour chapter 31 . 9/7/2014
Awesome story!
jk chapter 23 . 8/2/2014
well Edward just makes all the rules doesn't he...yes Edward of course your right well only have sex when you want so sorry to have suggested otherwise but please let me give you head to make up for my unthoughtfulness...and I love that your so turned on by me CHOKING on your dick...sick fuck
Guest chapter 15 . 8/2/2014
why do you have bella just suck up all his shit? I don't get it fuck shes such a victim...I don't care if jane left his ass...Edward was begging ...BEGGING a woman to stay with him begging her to let him be the baby daddy just a fucking month ago! he will cling to anything with a fucking vagina...he is more fucked up then bella and bella needs to run the fuck right now!
jk chapter 13 . 8/2/2014
shes 19 and shes never had a orgasm...ya right. maybe not from sex cause shes a fucking idiot but we all know she touched herself. seriously if she isn't getting off from sex with jake its her fault all she needs to do is tell him what feels good...sounds like jack made a effort and bella just layed there like a dead fish...god she was awful to jake. I fuckin hate bella in this story naïve little skank
jjk chapter 10 . 8/2/2014
I think their both idiots and don't need each other...bellas a clingy hoe and Edwards got some issues he needs to deal with
jk chapter 8 . 8/2/2014
why is it that everything bella does is weird, awkward, or stupid as hell?
jk chapter 7 . 8/2/2014
god shes soooo clingy! she doesn't even know this guy. first off im actually pretty upset she didn't leave after he yelled at her and treated her like shit for what I can see as not a good enough reason so she didn't want to tell her cop father she got into a car with a the hell what? and please tell me why she would need to crawl onto the bed to get a pillow...does that even make since? nope. she coulda just used her sweatshirt for a pillow you need a reason for her to be in his room whatever but just making stupid shit up doesn't work...she shouldn't even be there, who puts up with a stranger yelling at them? then makes it like its her fault...a victim that's who
jk chapter 5 . 8/2/2014
damn this bitch is clingy as hell
jk chapter 3 . 8/2/2014
I don't get why shes being so retarded she doesn't live her life with people needing her...renee hasn't even been home shes been by herself...its not fucking demanding. she treats jake like absolute shit, moves to fuckin Arizona but keeps in on the hook with I love yous like a fucking worm then bolts when he wants to make sure she wants him cause shes acting like she doesn't so she runs and jumps into a car with a stranger...she has no money no stuff how embarrassing, how does she expect to eat? who gets in a car with a stranger and expects him to pay her way? god shes soooooo stupid and Edward should have kicked her out of his car as soon as she said she couldn't afford a room...if she cant afford what 60 bucks then she cant feed or cloth herself either! what is she gonna do when he needs to drop her off? he should have told her to get the fuck out and stop being stupid!
sleepallday chapter 31 . 5/27/2014
Great story! I enjoyed reading it. Loved the adoption storyline.
I liked the characters although I have to say I think Bella behaved horribly towards Jake and I was really surprised by all the hate he got in the reviews. I mean he was her friend for a long time, boyfriend for two years and there was no indication that he was bad to Bella. So it was pretty cold of her to run out on him without an explanation, break up with him over the phone and then just treat him like he was somehow the bad person in all of this and get mad at him for not taking it gracefully. It's horrible to get treated like you don't matter by a person you trusted...Yeah, so I felt really bad for Jake throughout.
Anyways I will definitely be checking out your other stories, if there are any :) Loved it!
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