Reviews for Running for Home
pleiades88 chapter 14 . 5/22/2010
I like your writing, really, but this chapter was just... pure smut. I probably sound like a prude, but I like some plot too. I'm not sure where this is headed, but I'd like to see more character development or something.
DJUBS chapter 14 . 5/22/2010
WHAT! OMG I didn't see this one coming...

great chapter.
Twink423 chapter 14 . 5/22/2010
Hey bb! Love the final draft and I loved the pervy Edward thoughts you added in from me!

Way to leave us hanging with that cliffie! I just knew something was up with a possible baby situation when the discussed the cars before and how Edward got the Volvo because it was more "practical"... So now I wonder if it is actually his baby or if Jane was cheating on him or whatevs... Will be fun to find out and to see if Bella will let him explain what is going on and what the sitch is.

Hot oral scenes too, btw... I love Sweetward taking his time with her and being gentle, etc. So perfect and loved him telling her he adored her... Awwww... Just so sweet, I want him. :-)

luv ya bb! And see ya soon too!
VeneziaK chapter 14 . 5/22/2010
Last night...yeah...(dreamy face...XD)

Ok, first I really think that they should talk about their real relationship soon because this just seems to be friends with benefits you know. They jumped straight to the physical part and even though they've spent some good quality time together they should talk about their real feelings even if they are just about them liking eacch other. Jumping straight to the love-theme wouldn't do either. Anyway, I think that the title of the chapter is about the baby Jane had right? God, talk about complicated...what a tease!Maybe this will be their motive to talk. And they should really get going for Edward's father.

Always here waiting for more! Your story is one of a kind!
cullengirl08 chapter 14 . 5/22/2010
Ok, I'm very confused now. I really hope that Jane's baby doesn't have anything to do with Edward. Bella is hoping that isn't the case either.
ilovedonuts chapter 14 . 5/22/2010
Please tell me it's not Edwards, I am assuming it is not since he does not seem to be the type to abandon a child after what he went through.
athena-apollo chapter 13 . 5/20/2010
Whew! I just read through all 13 chapters, and let me tell you they're AWESOME! I think I may know who Edwards bio father is, and I think Edward's dad is also the dad of Bella's good friend. I won't say any names just in case, but I'm so excited to see the outcome.

Oh and caught me in a 'what the fudge' moment when the sister turned out to me the mom. Great twist by the way.

See in Ch. 14!
athena-apollo chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
Awesome first chapter!

I think I heard about this story over on the fictionators, so I'm really excited to read this story.

By the looks of this first chapter I'd say it's going to be very good.

the inc pot chapter 13 . 5/17/2010
I really love this story, and where you're going with it. I can't wait to see who his birth dad is (Carlisle?) Anyhow, I wholeheartedly believe you deserve hundreds of reviews for this story.

xxx can't wait for the next update!
King'Kong'Quisha chapter 13 . 5/9/2010
I can't describe how much I adore this story..
VeneziaK chapter 13 . 5/8/2010
You really have a way with words!

1. "What he's doing right now isn't even kissing; it's a form of art..." Maybe he should open his own gallery! Just a suggestion ;-)

2. "When his body shifts, I feel something hard press against my thigh." Yeah, what that migt be...? Who knows...maybe you should make a poll about this...

My point is that even though the chapter's main content was the last scene you make every scene enjoyable. And I really enjoy reading your story! And I was sure that Bella would be the one to take the first step. Well done for her! I hope that they will soon realise how much they love each other but I know this is an empty hope. Damn, and it will make it better if you tease them for a while longerXD

Waiting for the next chapter impatiently!
ilovedonuts chapter 13 . 5/8/2010
How do you not have more reviews this story is awesome, I can't wait for the next update, that last chapter was hot!
crimsonrose0003 chapter 13 . 5/7/2010
Yeah! So sweet! Loved it!
Twink423 chapter 13 . 5/7/2010
And I love Edward!

So happy they finally are communicating about stuff... like agreeing to share a bed from now on.

And yay for the lemony goodness... Glad I could help with the chappie and can't wait for Epov up next... he is so much more fun to play with. ;) I can channel my inner dirty guy, mind in the gutter.

And theories on the Edward "pratical" car comment is that maybe him and Jane were going to or did have a child or something like that.

And loved Edward being gentle and sweet with Bella while giving her the first big O she's ever had. Can't wait for many more to follow. He really is a Sweetward, my favorite kind!

Love ya bb!
EverlastingMuse chapter 13 . 5/7/2010
very good!
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