|Reviews for Sleeping with the Girls, Vol I: Fictional Reality|
| IcedEarth chapter 15 . 4/28
When I heard "Nuke it from orbit" , I knew it was SpaceBattles.
| Ibskib chapter 17 . 3/19
"the depravity of our situation"? Seems like a strange expression to use.
run a - run by a
| SixPerfections chapter 1 . 9/29/2014
ok, i dont know if you realize it but this chapter failed to say if the SI is male or female.. i'll go with chick for now though it probably a dude lol
| Malix2 chapter 22 . 7/7/2014
Interesting story. BTW, were you aware that this first volume /still/ isn't marked as complete, even after more than 3 years.
| Malix2 chapter 15 . 7/6/2014
Hehe, it was funny, I loaded the song you mentioned in this chapter, and it /literally/ finished just as I got to the end of the chapter.
| TheBigOne chapter 2 . 7/2/2014
I skipped ahead to post this since the site seems to randomly allow or not allow two reviews per chapter depending on whatever mood the site is on.
Anyways PLEASE make the chapters tell what the universe is instead of titles that have nothing to do with it or otherwise I rate your fic an C-minus only because the writing is at least well done or it would've been an F for everything being confusing.
| TheBigOne chapter 1 . 7/2/2014
I have rarely ever seen any *What If* fanfics and it's more of the teenage hormone fics that are dominant.
I have found a few but they are usually canceled or never updated for years which you never hear a peep from the author.
Fan Fiction brings in the worst of people usually as I have several *What If* ideas for some familiar fantasy worlds since I believe in the multiverse theory but most people
| Ahardie chapter 21 . 6/16/2014
Ok, i'm slightly confused as to what happened
| Ahardie chapter 20 . 6/16/2014
This is like, to see the hero 'lose' sometimes.
| Ahardie chapter 9 . 6/16/2014
'i'm from Texas, and I have a GUN' ...you sir just made my day
| Ahardie chapter 8 . 6/16/2014
And that delightful mini breakdown happens. It felt a little short though
| Ahardie chapter 7 . 6/16/2014
As someone who'se been up the entire night, I congratulate you on accuratley portraying 'tired'
| Ahardie chapter 6 . 6/16/2014
Hm, was it always the intent for this chapter to end on such a pensieve note?
| Ahardie chapter 5 . 6/16/2014
It's nice to see the usage of required secondary physics here, I always hated 'flawless' abilities
| Ahardie chapter 4 . 6/16/2014
You sir get my preps for remembering the humble triangle stranglehold.