Reviews for Harry Potter and the Four Lords of Death |
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![]() ![]() Thanx for the warning that it was à Harry/ginny story. Prevented me from doing a great mistake of reading it Noting against your writing just hate that paring in stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok so far. A few grammatical errors but nothing to serious. Hope that you are going to keep going as this seems an interesting concept for a HP story. James |
![]() ![]() ![]() pretty cool!Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() :D great story! Please post soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. keep writing. update soon. I can't wait to read more! This is getting interesting. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is not meant to rush you with the chapter, but you wrote a couple of months ago (on your profile) that the next chapter would be up within a couple of days, however I haven't seen it yet, so I am beginning to wonder whether the story has been abandoned or something like that. I find it has promise so I hope that you are still working on it and that it won't be too long until you post the next chapter. PSaid |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like it it has a lot of promise there were a few spelling errors but it was still good please update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice story can't wait for the next chapter update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this sounds like it might be a good story, my only problem is you said harry had a backpack he used for school. since harry is just turning four he wouldnt be going to school at this time and i dont think the dursleys would pay for him to go to preschool |
![]() ![]() ![]() A good start I like this already. I hate it when people make Harry to powerful |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like strong Harry stories, so I think I'll give this a try. When I say strong I don't just mean physically and magically, I mean emotions confidence and self worth. I hate it when the Dursleys have beaten him down so much that he feels like he's worth nothing, and that never changes no matter how strong he tries to act on the outside. |