|Reviews for My loving demons|
| migros256 chapter 19 . 8/19
Just wanted to add my two cents, great fic!
| Dragon and Sword Master chapter 19 . 6/16
Interesting little chapter here, though I'm curious if Naruto actually showed up or if that was just all in her head...
| the shadow overlord279 chapter 4 . 6/12
Why is Naruto still a genin? He's the most powerful shinobi in the village, just promote him. Seriously, the principle of the thing: he's the most powerful in the village. What does a guy have to do to get a promotion?
| Anko4Life chapter 19 . 6/10
this is awesome i love the fall of truth confrontation and I can't wait to see what'll happen next ... keep up the great work.
| Guest chapter 19 . 6/9
Can't wait to see what you have in store next. Keep up the awesome work!
| thor94 chapter 19 . 6/9
really touching chapter.
liked how naruto and kyuubi solved their inner demons.
something that bother me in this fic is naruto forgiving that sasuke asshole, again and again.
| Naruto Loves FemKyuubi chapter 19 . 6/9
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| TazalTerminals chapter 19 . 6/8
Damn that ending...was sweet and nice. ;)
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/15
You should have stop while you're ahead
| Guest chapter 18 . 2/9
| perfectshade chapter 1 . 12/12/2015
Regardless of how cringeworthy i found the later parts of this chapter(the clichees/angst just came too fast and too many) it was still surprisingly fun/okay.
But that is not what i'm hear to say.
What i really liked was your convincing rendition of an abusive Konoha. Both the passive-aggressive people and those that would resort to physical violence. And then the smaller group that would resort to outright murder.
To have a broken woman "kill" him in despair while thinking that she CAN'T do wrong because either he is innocent and goes to heaven or a demon and to hell is shockingly easy to imagine. How she kept some civil behaviour was also a nice touch(the prayer...) that got counterbalanced by her deranged way of butchering him with a dull knife instead of slitting the throat for a really quick death.
Shows how delusion and pain can make you very irrational yet logical.
All in all that really surprised me and i was delighted to see a good execution of the trope(Naruto abused/hurt by mob). After all it can work nicely if you aren't as stupid and unimaginative as you can be about it.
| Shane chapter 15 . 11/30/2015
…What just happened?
| Shane chapter 14 . 11/30/2015
Everyone sucks at keeping secrets. Seriously, every single person knows what the other is thinking, and if someone doesn't know something- SURPRISE! It was an act, they knew all along. How is Kyuubi so bad at this? After hearing "i know what you're thinking…" and "KYUUBI! You arn't seriously thinking…?" So much you'd think she'd work on her poker face. Since, aparently, after several centuries she hasn't learned how to keep a secret or hide her thoughts.
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/26/2015
keep it up, man! it's been ages since i've last seen something like this!
| AkashimaUchiha chapter 18 . 11/23/2015
Great fanfic with proper grammar.