Reviews for Xavia
laloquita.co chapter 9 . 9/18/2014
me gusto
animelvr2x2X2x2 chapter 9 . 8/1/2012
lets just cut to the chase-this story was really good and i loved it :)
morallygreydesi chapter 9 . 4/18/2011
It was perfect in every way..
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 9 . 6/26/2010
I love how you ended this off recalling what everyone learned from the trip. Fantastic!

I like Derek's blurb a lot but I wish we saw Casey opening that gift. I seriously LOVE how their dynamic changed to what it was at the end. What did Derek actually get George and Edwin?

In a way I feel bad for Sheldon but Sam did say awhile ago that Sheldon was being 'left behind'

Fantastic idea and it was very well written D
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 8 . 6/26/2010
Ralph found one of his shoes behind the toilet. - WTF? How does that happen?

I like how the five were in the end and how comfortable they had been with each other (well for Casey when she's surrounded by Sam and Derek)

I agree, the return trip always seems shorter
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 7 . 6/26/2010
"They are morning harpies." Ralph agreed, rolling over on his bed. LOL

Poor Emily, Ralph and Sheldon

I seriously LOVE the dynamic between Casey and Derek in this story. I wanted to hear when Derek had learned of his changed feelings for Casey (the story he told her in the shop to distract her)
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 6 . 6/26/2010
I absolutely love how Casey and Derek bonded. I love them in this chapter!

I like Sam's realization of how they all have changed on this trip. I like that thought.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 5 . 6/26/2010
Casey & Derek's 'relationship' being what everyone wants was AWESOME!

I like that Derek went after Casey. I like that she confided in him and he comforted her. I LOVE what Derek did to help Casey sleep.

Poor Ralph, I hope he wins in the end.

I like that Sam and Ralph know what's been going on with Derek's 'feelings'
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 4 . 6/26/2010
Poor Emily.

So did Derek by both items from the glass store?

I wanted Derek to comfort a scared Casey but I guess not (

I like how their trip is going
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 3 . 6/26/2010
Ralph grinned, "Wow, this is even better than morning cartoons."

"I really hope they don't drown each other," Sheldon told Emily worriedly.

The games were very amusing. I'm surprised that Derek was the one to help Casey out (considering Sam is there too)

The marshmellow bit was funny.
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 2 . 6/26/2010
Ralph still hadn't forgiven her or stopped giving her the stink eye. - LOL on Ralph and his need for TV.

I like the way you jump from one moment to the next and describing what is needed to be said.

Casey & Derek being pillows for each other was cute! Picture worthy is correct.

So who ended up on the pull out couch? Assume only 2 people can sleep on it, right?
Dark-Supernatural-Angel chapter 1 . 6/26/2010
Awesome beginning.

I too wasn't expecting Derek's reaction.
wprincessannw chapter 9 . 4/22/2010
great job! loved ur Dasey so sweet but still silly, a little crazy. and you foreshadowed the ralph/emily so well that I thought it might be in my imagination but at the same time when they slept together I wasn't suprised.
itsi3 chapter 9 . 4/17/2010
Sweet ending!

~Crystal
itsi3 chapter 8 . 4/17/2010
Aww I don't want it to end either, guys!

Love it! So realistic!

~Crystal
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