I just started reading this today, and man this is incredibly enticing and extremely well written! Story wise, the setting, plot and all are an amazing read. I respect the proper use grammar as well, awesome job so far! I'm loving every chapter.

I have loved Spyro since I was a kid, played almost every game; Once Dawn of the Dragon came out, I always wanted to know, imagine (fantasize if you will) and read what would become between the two loving dragons after Malefor's defeat. The purple and Black Dragon, bonded by the trauma of war and now inseparable by the love they share. Wicked read so far man, I am hooked by this. I have read quite a few fan fictions, some struck out and some not as much; though, still good. This one, however, really hits out it out of the park!

No way this was one of the best chapters I've ever read

how is spyri arrogant?

Well, I must say, my heart broke for Atla. Still, at least many new dragons have been freed. A well-written story.

Aw, the Kodiak moment between those boys. And I like Mother Seak and Elder Ryokku.

That poor, lonesome, grief-stricken dragon. The war with Malefor destroyed him from the inside out.

Meadow's the most fun cheetah in the tribe.

I do understand Atla better, though, letting heartbreak destroy his mind and will to live isn't right. What we can't get back, we can still find something new and wonderful. Hopefully, Spyro can teach him that.

Oh, darn it all! Ember almost had her guy back! And that Atla is a coward to flee when he loses the advantage, not to mention cheating by usin' fancy, mystical toys to gain an unfair fighting chance. Well, toys can only help you for so long.

All this because Atla wants to be right, that his powers are being used correctly? Truly a messed up, broken young dragon.

I didn't expect Atla capable of shedding any tears. Learning his motives should be interesting.

Love the kissing scenes

Poor, rash, naive Flame. It wasn't Atla that betrayed him, it was his own arrogance and jealousy that became his downfall. All unhappiness aside, very satisfied with Spyro and Cynder's reconcilation.

Thank goodness for the sensible Hunter. Hope everything else will make sense in time.

Hunter's like a big brother, isn't he? ️