|Reviews for Revenge Cake|
| rocklesson86 chapter 27 . 3/31
This story was funny as hell.
| Insufficient Nightmares chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
lmfao i read this awhile back too and I specially looked for it again.
omg this is brilliant and I had a good laugh.
I love this omf.
| cloudshadow22 chapter 27 . 1/24/2014
Best ending ever!
| cloudshadow22 chapter 26 . 1/24/2014
Was rereading this and wanted to say how much I enjoyed the snippet within Seth's brain - he is usually such a straight-laced guy, it was fun to see him as a true-blue, hot blooded teenager.
| PastOneonta chapter 27 . 8/25/2013
Holy shit, loved this story, it earned its awards and recognition! I loved Leah the way you wrote her, angry and unapologetic and reveling in her bitchiness. I loved Jake, Alpha and confident but messed up over Bella when we first met him. He knew he was messed up and he was trying to fix it but he still felt responsible for her "death". And it still hurt him that she hadn't loved him enough. He was so generous and patient with Leah, that is really how Jake was written, to be giving and loving.
I truly appreciate that he didn't imprint on Reneesmee, that was a tragedy. She turned out to be pretty cool, unlike her stick in the mud parents. Loved the scene where Jake and Leah turn wolf in front of Abram, when Leah hit A over the head with the vase it was hysterical. It worked out for them. Loved the ring and Leah accepting and the weddings (Sue and Charlie and Jake and Leah). The sex was awesome, Leah talking or thinking about Jake's dick like a Zeus god dick was fantastic.
And the big star of the story, the cake, oh my god, brilliant. You carried it throughout, with the chapter titles as well as the story. The end with Seth (who was a very different and sexy Seth than I've ever read) and R was just brilliant. Thanks for this story, it was excellent, and the happy ending for Jake and Leah was wonderful.
| frekles chapter 13 . 6/20/2013
love all the chapters, such a good read for a boring summer day!
| frekles chapter 11 . 6/20/2013
the angst is killing me...
| frekles chapter 10 . 6/20/2013
okay-enough of this-wake up Leah...
| frekles chapter 9 . 6/20/2013
Leah should not be pushing Jacob away! Love the feelings in me you create-great writing!
| frekles chapter 8 . 6/20/2013
whoa-now that was bad ass!
| frekles chapter 7 . 6/20/2013
here's hoping Leah wakes up to realize how special Jake is...
| frekles chapter 6 . 6/20/2013
it is hard to stop and review when you have me jumping to the next chapter to see how they will have sex next!
| frekles chapter 4 . 6/20/2013
cannot wait to see where everyone else came up with!
| frekles chapter 3 . 6/20/2013
have to say-I just discovered your stories and am now reading them all-sorry I have not commented on all, will try to better. I love your stuff-well done!
| AlwaysAnAussie chapter 27 . 1/1/2013
lol. That was the perfect ending. I really enjoyed this fic.
I have to admit this is the first Blackwater fic I've read,so I was a little apprehensive at the beginning because I was trying something new, but these two make sense together.
You did a great job writing the fun and conflict between them. Thx for sharing your idea.