Reviews for The Natural Order of Things
kekemartinez chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
cellaria chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
this was hot! but what a freaking tease you are!ha i wish you'd write more of them in general & longer ones.. but please write a second chapter with renji on top! that's probably my fav pairing! :D bya pretty much said he could do anything so yeah i'm practically feeling like renji right now hahah seriously do you take requests?
honeyMellon chapter 1 . 5/2/2013
Lovely! What a hot picture you paint despite the small number of words! :D
Caitriona695 chapter 1 . 2/28/2013
Byakuya's dirty mouth is almost too much to handle. Yummy!

Thanks for sharing.
RukiaTheCat chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Normally, I'm not a fan of yaoi, but I found this story weirdly erotic. Very good work indeed!
matchynishi chapter 1 . 8/17/2011
Uwaaa how is this so great. *_*
ActuallyNevis chapter 1 . 6/20/2011
I think that was perfect! Probally one of the best written ones probally because it is exactly something they would both do! I really, really liked it!
Phoenixzsar chapter 1 . 5/30/2011
Wow, the room got really hot while reading this...*ahem* So, uh, yeah, I think Renji got the point Byakuya was trying to make. Nicely written! :)
Rauwrtsch chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
lol , it seems, Byakuya likes dirty talking o3o

*has mental images now*

*gets kicked over by nosebleed*
Shellbow chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
Wow, this story was great! I really enjoyed seeing Byakuya put Renji in his place. That kind of round about way of teaching him seems like something he would do. This one made my night :3
vermilioncream chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
i loved it. very hot
vermilioncream chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
great story. very hot
alliefan chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
write another chapter PLEASE!
female-otaku chapter 1 . 3/16/2010 beautifuly written...
Cat Streaked By Rain chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
XD Hotness. I would like a sequel. x3
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