|Reviews for Suffocation|
| hyrushoten chapter 3 . 3/6/2010
An interesting idea and way of showing Kyon start to crack under the pressure. My major problem has to do with your formatting. Namely you need to separate your author's notes from the story, last chapter I had to re-read those last lines multiple times to figure out that the stuff about facebook was your author's notes and not part of the story.