Reviews for Revenge till the end
Guest chapter 2 . 5/30/2013
Please update
Love this story!
Good boy-chan chapter 2 . 1/14/2012
HOW HAVE YOU NOT UPDATED FOR SO LONG? Please update, I need more...
Yue Heartphilia chapter 2 . 5/3/2011


Keep updating!

Ganbatte! XD
SiriusBalisticPretzels chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
I really absolutely totally love your story! Please update soon!
firey-lotus chicka chapter 2 . 11/7/2010
Yeah, kick jyou's crazy pyshcopath butt! *cheerleader vibes* I AM HYPER ON CHICKEN!
AnotherLostChance chapter 2 . 10/30/2010
Chapter 3 soon T_T I'm on the edge *cries*
Love Is Only a Word chapter 2 . 8/7/2010
okay seriously what the hell? Why haven't you updated? This is a great story...update! Sorry to be so rude, but u really need to update it!
trashaccount2 chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
monkeerangerfan chapter 2 . 4/13/2010
this was great. can't wait for then next chapter.
ilovemusic11 chapter 2 . 4/12/2010
i really like this story. i thought i wouldn't like reading a story that's not sakurasomebody but boy was i wrong.
ylfrettub chapter 2 . 4/4/2010
Youhave an interesting story. It has a few grammatical errors, but otherwise it's fine
Freak Re-L chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
Ooh... I like this! But I hope you're not being too mean to the perfect Nara family. Oh God, love them.

Update soon!
Karatekid-Ninja chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
continue for sure i love shikatema and i love the whole twist you put in great to read,

cant wait to read moore soon

Tigers and Dragons chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
What happened to happily ever afters? And since when did anyone escape Gaara's sand coffin? I thought that was impossible. How old are these kids?

Keep writing, I want answers (gives a scary, serious look) No, I'm just kidding (about the look that is)
GUYFawke chapter 1 . 3/5/2010
I'll try to give constructive criticism:

First: Please stop with the

~ end of p.o.v.

~Flashback/End Flashback~

-with person-

It make it rubish and unprofessional

2: No point of view. These story tend to be unapealing and unimaginative. Try working the story out without using first person naration. Keep with third person

Your story is good (even though Temari is way too out of Character) Please continue and take my advice into consideration

Take care


P.S.: This wasn't flamming. Here's flamming:

"You suck go hang yourself!" which I would never write such thing.
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