Reviews for Angels' Playground
Olivia Hussey 2 chapter 1 . 7/27/2012
This was so cute! And I just watched the movie so I'm no longer depressed! Yay!
Watch the 1968 Romeo and Juliet for me!
LOve, Olivia Hussey
sfbxfcb chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Bramber1417 chapter 1 . 10/3/2010
This is an amazing pice of I first heard the bit about the 'wnadering hands' I was gonig to stop readig, thinking 'Shes going to ruin this with a sex scene' and then it was ended perfectly and I loved it. Please write more!
lovelylittleflowerchild chapter 1 . 6/30/2010
Very Good! You describe things very well and make them seem so real.
Agent Striker chapter 1 . 4/28/2010
Wow...that was...AMAZING! The writing was beautiful and so creative! Love it!
Jellicle Jacquie chapter 1 . 3/15/2010
Awsome! I love it!
Principessa Dell'Opera chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Good concept. Well concieved. You know I luv u, but you desperately needed a beta for this story. Don't get me wrong, it was lovely, but there was need for a beta.

I've only seen half of West Side Story, but I do know what is is based on: Romeo and Juliet. You caught the Shakespearean feeling of hope and doom very well, since we all know what happened.

Some word choices were questionable, but nevertheless, it was still good.

It shows promise! You have tons of potential as an author. Good luck!

~La Principessa Dell'Opera