|Reviews for Ghosts|
| Samolfran chapter 6 . 3/24/2010
yay, glad to hear more is coming. More Joker/Shepard action, puhlease? ;D
| Sillusion chapter 6 . 3/16/2010
Gotta love a bit of Shep/Joker. It's annoying that it's not a potential relationship in-game too, but at least we can hope for Mass Effect 3!
| InkiBlinkiPinki chapter 6 . 3/15/2010
Stupid Horizon! My scene was w/ Kaiden and not Ashley as I made her go bye bye in the first game ( All I wanted was an option to slug him and it never came... jerk lol I'm not a big fan of writtn fight scenes but yours came out good _
| fruitloops was taken chapter 6 . 3/13/2010
So I've never played ME, I really want to but I don't have an xbox and my computer is too old to run it :( but I wanted to say I stumbled upon this story while I was finishing your DA series (amazing btw, I'm def team alister but love your zev-ness, please continue those too!) and this made me so sad that joker isn't a romance option bc he seems so freakin adorable. at least the way you write him :)
| melstewarthm chapter 6 . 3/13/2010
Wow! I love it! I was so bummed that I couldn't romance Joker, I mean REALLY! He's such a cutie... So, hope this story isn't going to be short, I need me some Joker :D
| Rhiannan365 chapter 6 . 3/13/2010
Despite the delay, I forgive you because this is really great writing. I liked how you put in Joker's response to ash's comments. I'll break my arm at her! Classic. keep it up! (don't worry about writing the fights they're still really good. I could invision it in my mind, so that's something)
| Nuria Shadow chapter 5 . 3/11/2010
Ha, all kinds of adorable. Like the story, keep it up.
| InkiBlinkiPinki chapter 5 . 3/11/2010
Aw... i LOVE Joker time ( Why does he have to be so freakin' adorable? lol Great/funny chapter as always _
| Leeirane chapter 5 . 3/11/2010
I absolutely love your story. It's hilarious. Joker is so sweet :-) You don't have to apologize for this chapter it was perfect.
| Belladonna-Isabella chapter 5 . 3/11/2010
This is a great story. I really enjoyed reading it and I love how you portray Joker. I can't wait to read more
| Rhiannan365 chapter 5 . 3/11/2010
I has so happy when I saw the update! I like the part where Joker was daydreaming and EDI told him to get out of the elevator. Acutally I loved all of it.
| The Fico chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
I'm glad that i'm not the only one that pictures Joker comically arguing with himself
| InkiBlinkiPinki chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
" .Awesome" lol Nice chapter _ I really like that you mention events about to happen but don't go into detail about them, like the meeting w/ Anderson. That leaves more time for our happy duo! Can't wait to read more _
| Phoenix Fire Lady chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
Well, I have never played Mass Effect and don't have much knowledge about the what's going on in this universe, about the characters or their relationships with one another (I am probably spoiling myself terribly if I ever do decide to plunge into the ME world). But I must say how much I am enjoying this story and how I simply got sucked in into this rendition.
Asirus, you write so damn well! I absolutely adore your Dragon Age stories (as you well know *wink) but it is clear that you can write beautifully; you present us with a story that you care about, the characters have depth to them, are not merely two dimentional, one can glimpse so many facets to them in your writing.
Every time I read Joker's internal dialogue I have to crack up, it's just so hilarious. Juliet is a marvel, I adore her. She's so strong (especially the scene in this chapter where she slugs Miranda... ah, so beautiful), with her owwn demons and internal struggles. Even Garrus was a joy to read about.
And oh boy... this chapter... I'm like a little kid in the candy store, after getting my candy fill already, and asking "May I have more please?" LOLs.
Encore! Encore! ;o)
| Rhiannan365 chapter 4 . 3/9/2010
I absolutly love this troy. I gets better and better each chapter. And you update fast! So I don't go insane(jk). anyways keep up the amazing work.