|Reviews for Dangers in the past|
| delete-account-please 4171342 chapter 52 . 7/21/2013
this was a great story really liked it.
| CazPeak chapter 18 . 1/4/2013
Yeah - struggling too much with this... Ron saying "we're stuck here" when clearly they wanted to come - why would Dumbledore remotely think that they needed to be? And instead of focussing on what they are to do, they decide to out-marauder the marauders and suddenly they are kings of the classroom, because they are all repeating their 5th year. Bit convenient. By the way - a 6 inch paper would be like a half page. What would be the point of writing a paragraph - especially for OWL year classes?
Think I have to give this a pass... I see it was written 10 years ago, so maybe I'm being unduly harsh. But just can't take the Trio being sent to the past when clearly there's no reason for Ron or Hermione to be there. I just find it too hard to believe that Dumbles would send those people back in time to prevent something from happening, and then say 'you know what else this mission needs? Two kids who just passed their OWLs, because they are sure to be mature enough to handle this and ensure our success. It'll be great too if they get sorted into Gryff, because chances are 100% that neither will do something or say something stupid - especially Ron, cause he always maintains his cool in the face of pressure'. Unless, of course, he just didn't want to deal with the annoying pests in his own time.
| CazPeak chapter 15 . 1/4/2013
Yeah - starting to get a bit depressed... same characters - same actions. Harry should be sorted first - Denton comes before Grand - but instead is sorted last. Hermione - bossy and ordering the hat around. Ron re-emphasises the fact that he's not hard working, yet you've given him 13 OWLs. Inconsistencies...
| CazPeak chapter 14 . 1/4/2013
Ron & Hermione coming to the past as well? With the host of characters in the past that would be available I'm not sure why you have to recreate the original story relationships. Seems a bit suspect - not to mention the whole OWLing 25 years in the past again... Not sure that a stupid Ron & a demanding know-it-all Hermione is what this story needs.
| CazPeak chapter 7 . 1/4/2013
Uh... letters from the future to the past, being delivered by Hedwig (who is also in the past)? Even more confusing - Dumbledore sent Harry's OWL results from the future to the castle where past-Dumbledore is, who would probably wonder about who sent the OWLs since past-Dumbledore didn't? And with OWLs being delivered, Harry is going to announce to all professors there that he is retaking his OWL year classes? After getting 14 OWLs? Lastly - Ron who plays chess and bums around constantly, relying on Hermione to do his homework, managed to get 13 OWLs?
Not too much of that is credible.
| delete-account-please 742011 chapter 52 . 8/25/2012
this story was great.
| OldestOfTheYoung chapter 42 . 7/8/2012
I am practically sobbing right now, thank you very much! If you kill Harry and don't somehow find a way for him to come back, I will never forgive you! Never!
| ebonierose234 chapter 21 . 1/29/2012
love this story. loving the snake name as well! yeah, i have a pet snake, pretty dangerous, can kill with one bite. his names Derek! find it so funny xxxx
| Child of Dreams chapter 34 . 1/6/2012
I've figured out the riddle! Here's my translation:
"In the chamber of the greatest founder..."
The Chamber of Secrets, built by Salazar Slytherin
"From the girl who cries forever..."
The entrance is in Moaning Myrtle's bathroom
"To the chamber where the king of snakes rests..."
The king of snakes is the Basilisk
"The stag and the flower will finally meet their end."
James and Lily will die
| Lollypops101 chapter 7 . 12/23/2011
the twiwizard winnings were 1,000 galleons, not one million.
| EmeraldGrey57 chapter 52 . 8/18/2011
Hey, I love dangers in the past. I cant find the prequel to it. Could you please give me the link to it. Thanks
| hazelnuticecream chapter 7 . 6/6/2011
I think this is a very interesting story and seems very promising. I'm not sure if I like how you are portraying harry. Likely at 16 and just have vanquished voldemort he wouldn't put his arms around sirius neck in public and snuggle. You're kind of making him at like a very young child, or a little girl. Also changing his eyes would make him look less like lily but since james has hazel eyes it would do nothing to change their resemblance. Also I'm not sure if u changed any of sirius' features because otherwise I'm sure his younger self would know aswell as the other teachers. But beside those few notes I think you're doing a wonderful job and I can't wait to finish the story. :)
| Neumzie chapter 12 . 3/24/2011
"'Ethan and I were walking through the wall on our way outside when a section of the hall opened and death eaters started to come in. We were taken by surprise and didn't have the time to warn anyone. We were very lucky nearly all teachers were near, close enough to hear the shouts when the attack started. We started to fight them and the other professors joined us. Finally, when Ryan came we seemed to have the upper hand, but then a basilisk came out. We didn't stand a chance, we were overwhelmed since no one seemed able to get near the snake to kill it. We were losing badly when...' He stopped suddenly and looked apologetically at Dumbledore. "I think it's better if someone else continues, I know what happened but I didn't see it myself." Dumbledore nodded in agreement and everyone in the room turned to Flitwick.'
you never said who was talking
| Penny is wise chapter 52 . 2/27/2011
| demonturtle chapter 16 . 1/10/2010
I added your story to my new community. "10 reviews or more of the Harry Potter community."