Reviews for Dangers in the past
Neumzie chapter 38 . 6/2/2009
you know, whenever i think of them being crucified (kinda), i think of Silent Hill (the movie, not the game). god, that movie was fuckin creepy (sorry for the harsh languange, but i didnt think 'freakin' expressed my creep-out factor enough lol)
Neumzie chapter 24 . 6/2/2009
ok, as soon as you said that "headmaster" would be the past one and "dumbledore" would be the future one, you put this statement:

"Both nodded at the room and then the headmaster walked towards Harry and took the boy into his arms..."

make up your mind! lol still like the story, but i tend to notice inconsistencies and grammer stuff a lot.
Neumzie chapter 21 . 6/1/2009
oh was that older wormtail? i thought you meant the younger one. i was like, they cant kill him, that would DEFINITELY change the time line! lol
Neumzie chapter 19 . 6/1/2009
AGAIN WITH THE SPACING! its like that for the next few chapters, at least! change that! WTF!
Neumzie chapter 18 . 6/1/2009
whoa! wtf happened to the spacing!
Neumzie chapter 16 . 6/1/2009
"'No, nothing, we were just wondering if you're related to James.' Hermione cut in.

'Who's James?' Sirius silently pointed at the boy..."

when you line it up like that, it looks like hermione is asking is harry and james are related and sirius is asking who james is.
Neumzie chapter 13 . 6/1/2009
diablo? lmao what?
Neumzie chapter 7 . 6/1/2009
aww that was cute. the only problem i have is that, while i know harry is probably pretty light, hes still 15. how and why the hell would sirius sit him on his lap like a 6 or 7 year old? its more a dignity thing than a weight one.
Neumzie chapter 5 . 6/1/2009
o i love when harry is either shrouded in mystery or extremely powerful, and this has both! they do seem to work best together lol
Bagoosa chapter 24 . 5/26/2009
It's a bit chaotic, but good.
brigrove chapter 16 . 4/3/2009
I see you've changed a few things as James was never a prefect and didn't get together with Lily until their 7th year, but then, this was written back in 2002

Good story so far
puregarnet chapter 1 . 1/10/2009
adore it!
timme chapter 43 . 12/14/2008
they're a bit hypocritical. they think that by killing peter they're dooming their society? puh-lease! that doesn't make sense with any theory of time-travel, let alone what they themselves have been doing. they're hopping back and forth like a rabbit messing with time already. and they think getting rid of peter will destroy so much? yeah right. it's all about doing it with the right control. it's ridiculous to think they can tell these people this much and have them let it happen. it's ends up badly anyway.
timme chapter 24 . 12/14/2008
after the fiasco of letting wormtail go once, harry still wants to spare him? it's not his right to do that. sirius and remus have every cause to kill him. honestly, they're the adults there, harry should respect that.
CrayonsPink chapter 51 . 11/11/2008
I lLOVED your story! It was EXCELLENT!
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