Reviews for Death Comes Quickly
PunkEmoChick chapter 1 . 5/24/2011
Interesting. i like it! i think it was good. :)
OH MY chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Keep trying. It's a bit drab when all your paragraphs begin with dialogue and run into description that isn't as accurate as someone would want to read. Also you spelled "rational" wrong in your summary. :D Edit a bit more and you'll be sure to get it right!