|Reviews for Shattered Dreams|
| SeabeeGR chapter 3 . 1/13
Huh...I was expect alvida to react about luffy and Hancock
| SeabeeGR chapter 2 . 1/13
Ohhhhhh! (Giddy) finally something close to alter Canon!
| SeabeeGR chapter 1 . 1/13
Not bad, but how did the strawhats make it to luffy?
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 8 . 1/13
Really hoping you get back into this series!
Nice end line here!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 7 . 1/13
One thing I do admire about Hanock is her ability to bluff
Like Garp's threat if Luffy dies :-) Nice dog analogy with Garp's eyes
Wow, epic move by Blackbeard!
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 6 . 1/13
If only Robin had been able to fight her bounty would be higher...
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 3 . 1/13
Nice scene with Robin spying and her thoughts
LOL to the reactions of the Amazons
Smart move by the marines
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 1 . 1/12
Serious touch with the reference of the crew pulling Luffy out of insanity, and LOL to the reactions to Luffy's flying ship and scary Nami
...brilliant, absolutely brilliant and plausible idea by Usopp!
Hmm, looks like the crew got a major upgrade! From the future? Only complaint is that Robin did not do more, but still great!
| Xerzo LotCN chapter 8 . 8/19/2015
ohh this story is pretty good so yea its kia sad you haven't been able to update in over 5 year but i understand real life tough so it's ok if you ever can update i'd love to read it
| Asuka1920 chapter 8 . 8/18/2015
| Anime fan KNB chapter 8 . 11/30/2014
I just have one question is this story on Hiatus if it is could you Please P.M me
| Riassira Arabellum chapter 2 . 7/21/2013
It was a bit rushed in my opening and there are a lot of point were the story melts(doesnt give obvious chqnge in setting or time) do you hqve a beta?
| CaptainC chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
It has bin 3 years since the last update?
| CaptainC chapter 8 . 7/11/2013
I love the plot of this FanFic. and I think the only improvement you need is to check your spelling.
| ZorraVixen chapter 8 . 3/9/2013
Other than a few grammar and spelling errors, it is very minor and sometimes difficult to even notice, other than that everything is well written. The description is top notch, no repetitiveness, and you can feel the emotion pouring from the chapter. I honestly cannot wait until the next chapter