Reviews for Oblivious MAX
Kichou chapter 1 . 10/8/2014
I wish there was more chapters to this story. Nice story.
Sachiel Angelo chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
These two are both oblivious when it comes to themselves.
yoshimoriXsenXgen chapter 1 . 3/8/2013
Dude I love this there so oblivious that its cute
pinkus-pyon chapter 1 . 2/10/2013
kiuuuuuuuuuuuuu XD
Psychotetic chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
Oh my gosh, two oblivious best friends. xD

Monta is oblivious to his own while he notices Sena's and vice-versa to Sena.

How adorable!
Guest chapter 1 . 2/5/2012
Hahaha, I love how Sena sees the glint in others about others and viceversa with Monta! Makes him -Monta- all the more adorable x3
liar-just-a-liar chapter 1 . 3/23/2011
Wrong max ? That's so cute LOL
Mikky-mail chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
LOL, I think they both are a bit slow :D Those poor boys will forever trying to catch the hearts of Deimon's most oblivious receiver and running back. I feel sorry for them, but this is totally cute 3
TheDarkestButterfly chapter 1 . 6/29/2010
I liked this a lot! It was very cute but short which is fine too. your a very good writer so keep up the good work! :)
SelfcreatedCharacter chapter 1 . 6/15/2010
Who's really more oblivious? XD Haha.
fuwafuwamashimaro chapter 1 . 6/11/2010
Sena and Monta, oblivious MAX! XD

Love the story~
Kuraihikaru chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
Cute, hahaha they are both dense when it comes to who likes them
SwordsMagician chapter 1 . 3/12/2010
Haha, the denseness reigns supreme!

Really wasn't expecting the ending either, it was a good twist! Very hilarious when done from Monta's perspective. Nice job :)
RoseJustice chapter 1 . 3/11/2010
LOL...I'm not one for Yaoi...but I think you should write another story like this...funny, and vague on pairings...
green-road chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
This oneshot was very cute! I can't believe that it was refering to the both of them! Ha haa...a lot of people in Deimon team are dense, aren't they! Thank for wonderful story!
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