|Reviews for Amplify|
| Viktor Mayrin chapter 31 . 11/9/2012
Because I am a royal turd, I have only JUST now added this story as a favorite because I've been reading it on my phone at work and always forget when I get home. So, first of all, let me praise you on being generally awesome.
You are generally awesome.
Okay, now I'm specifically going praise aspects:
You're insanely good and fluff. I love fluff, and the byproduct of smuff (smut/fluff) that you seem to create with magic.
You're insanely good at characterization. Far better than I could hope to be in the next five years.
Your plots are insanely good. And thought out. And... other good stuff.
Yeah. Just, everything is awesome.
| BuriedInAHoodie chapter 9 . 11/8/2012
THANKYOUFORMAKINGSOMETHINGSO BEAUTIFULOHMYGLOBILOVEYOUMAR RYMETHISVERYINSTANTIBESEECHT HEE!
*ahem* Sorry, that was the feels talking. But I absolutely HAD to review on this chapter, not because it's best so far (I think "Come To Me" was my favorite so far, admittedly because Soul's stunt with the painkillers made my insides warm mush but also because it made me laugh the most while still giving me super-duper feels about Maka and Soul) but because I needed to say what an excellent job you do of describing the Soul Chain (despite what you seem to believe). Yes, it's hard to grasp because it is such an abstract idea and not a phenomenon you encounter, but you do a damn good job of making the audience understand what a tie to someone else in your very essence would be like. And in such beautiful prose! I love it! I love this story so much. :D And its introduced me to a bunch of awesome music (the first thing I do when I go to the next chapter is find the song on YouTube and ready myself by listening to it beforehand and YOUR MUSIC TASTE IS DELICIOUS). I'm now telling all my friends to listen to Bjork, especially the song for this chapter Joga.
:) So, I suppose this summarizes to thank you, thank you, you are amazing, and thank you! 3 Absolutely in love with this story!
| kaji13 chapter 31 . 11/7/2012
I'm speechless. This story went way beyond fanfiction, it's absolutely beautiful and incredibly well-written, and every chapter was better than the last. The characters, the detail, the moods and emotions, the plot - everything was perfec,t and now that it's over I'm left with that woefully satisfied but almost hollow, "what now" feeling that I get after devouring a really good book.
You are just going to have to keep writing forever because everything else I read is bound to pale in comparison. THANK YOU for this wonderful work of art!
I would have reviewed sooner but I never wanted to stop reading long enough to type something up! :)
| kaji13 chapter 6 . 10/30/2012
OMG! ""Seriously? I'm gone for eight-and-a-half fucking minutes and your tits are already out. God Damn!"" Hahahaha I just died laughing
I'm still giggling
| I'mnotsorryforleaving chapter 25 . 10/29/2012
Me : omigod...I can't stop blushing...
Soul: YOU, WHAT ABOUT ME I'M A FREAKING—?!
Maka: shut up I liked it.
Me and Soul: O.o
| I'mnotsorryforleaving chapter 24 . 10/29/2012
Me: OH MY GOD THAT WAS FREAKING BEAUTIFUL.
Soul: *nods like a cool boss*
Maka: *blushes to no end*
| Evil Pixie Queen chapter 31 . 10/29/2012
Amazing story! Best soul/maka ever!
| sheepeater chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
One chapter in, and I'm already hooked. The wriing is impeccable, and I really feel as if you've captured the characters. Nice work.
| EndlessSky26 chapter 8 . 10/21/2012
I love this so far!
| mandy347m chapter 31 . 10/17/2012
I love how the last night brings the story full circle to the beginning. This has been a fantastic story to read, and no doubt I will reread it some time soon. The steamy bits are well-done, and you seem to have such a great handle of the characters' voices. Cheers!
| jazzie560 chapter 28 . 10/15/2012
OH MY GOD MARSH I CAN'T I DON'T KNOW WHAT MY FEELINGS ARE DOING WHY MUST ALL GOOD THINGS COME TO AN END THIS IS MY MOST FAVORITE FANFIC EVER I JUST CAN'T YOU ENDED IT PERFECTLY. THAT LAST SENTENCE PULLED AT MY HEART SO BADLY IM
DYING THERE WILL NEVER BE ENOUGH WORDS TO EXPLAIN THE BEAUTY OF THIS FIC AND THE LOVE I HAVE FOR IT OHMYGOD STUOJGFGWRYKYIRPTPGFDLEFTLGI QWHLADNANDROLESHVXBHTPTLRHGS XVROTLE
| Fallen Up chapter 31 . 10/14/2012
I love you. So so much. And I am incredibly sad to see this story completed. Seriously, it is THE BEST SoMa story I have found and read to date. The way you write, is wonderful and a joy to read.
1) Your plot is just fun to read. You add in adorable funny moments, and sexy ones ;) But they way you write them makes me feel like they could easily be added into the show- if of course the show was for more adult audiences. Your story has the feel of the show, and how you pull it all together is beautiful. The best example of this is your god-damn beautiful ending- which I am not ashamed to admit I was getting teary-eyed over.
"The third movement is them. Theirs. Together. It's the screeching of their souls colliding, their voices when he's buried in her and her legs squeeze around him, the taste of her mouth lingering in his, and the smell of pine and burning wicks. It's the sound of a blade whistling through air, of gloves hissing across steel, of piano strings humming with their combined might. It's motorcycle engines and books snapping shut, and hair ties and leather jackets. It's stars falling through black holes, it's wings rustling overhead, it's scars and jars of cyst bits.
It's played in C-Sharp minor."
You tie every funny, wonderful, awesome moment of your story into the very ending. Including the 'jars and cyst bits.' Your ending was beyond satisfying for someone like me who found your story when it was only 2 chapters in, because it makes me feel like you really completed the journey. You went a full circle!
2) The simple way you tie words together. I believe I've left you a review before talking about this, but I can't help but say it again. Your descriptions, and sentences, and even freaking comma placements are stupendous. When I read it, I'm not only enjoying the story, but the actual words you use. The way people use words to tell a story can change it drastically because everyone has their own connotations of words- and I don't know about everyone else who read your story but for me, the descriptions you wrote were a joy to read. I would find myself re-reading things just because they sounded really incredibly beautiful.
3) A lot of stories I find a lot of OOC, it is probably the biggest problem next to bad plots. But your Soul and Maka interpretations are as spot on as I've seen. I really, really- and I can't stress this enough- love how you write them each. Their internal thoughts and reasonings to me sound perfect. And it might be a bit sad, but I love how you portray them almost better than the show. But I think you've really gone off of what the show has given us and developed amazing depth. Even in your descriptions (see above for the sheer sensationalness) you use words that feel like the characters.
I can't really get out how much I love your story and all of your other drabbles. I hope you never stop writing! And if you ever, ever stop posting to you MUST let me know where you plan on posting everything else because reading you is just too enjoyable to stop doing3
Thank you for the wonderful story :) It has given me much pleasure and enjoyment throughout the years, and I am thrilled for the things to come!
| chiibi13 chapter 31 . 10/9/2012
Oh lord. This was simply AMAZING. A genuine pleasure to read. The plot, the writing, the tone, everything - all wonderful. Definitely one of the best fics I've read in a long time.
I tip my hat to you, good sir!
| EmeraldStar-goddess chapter 31 . 10/7/2012
I finally caught up with your story and have now finished. I enjoyed it so much. It really was great.
| Miku39Hatsune chapter 31 . 10/3/2012
oh oh oh i had just run across this while hunting some good maka x soul fanfics and im extremely impressed with this one! The rated M scenes aren't grossly over exaggerated, sounding very much realistic, the plot and fluff, aaaahhh I WANNA SEQUEL! gimme sequel or ill infect you with the black blood! D: lol really though, amazing story! Wish i knew a good music friend to maybe make a song like the one you have described!