Reviews for Amplify
wildchild911 chapter 18 . 5/19/2010
i fucking love you . . .just wanted to throw that out there x3
Primi-tan chapter 18 . 5/19/2010
Poor Maka, a complete victim of the circumstances, and Soul is the devising, cunning, sexy beast that lurks in the other room. LOL!

I read the bit on LJ, and you did an incredible job. I love how this really wasn't rushed, how the tension between the two of them is played, and how Soul tries to cover it all up.

How sweet, Soul wants little kids running all around the apartment! LOL! Seriously, though they'd better use protection.

Oh well. Another great update from the person who, quite possibly, is the best person with a firm grasp on SoulxMaka philosophy. You have my loyalty!

Emerald Twin Blade chapter 18 . 5/19/2010
AHAHAHA! XD! I love you.

I freakin' LOVE you for this!

This is so freakin' SMART! Tellin' Tsubaki will make it known to Black*Star, who'll announce everything to the WORLD! AHAHA!

... poor Soul. XDD
thearistocrat chapter 18 . 5/19/2010
Great chapter! Before, after and during the smut. All of it was great.

And the end, terribly funny. ]
Ice of the Kitsune's Fire chapter 18 . 5/19/2010
Tsubaki's a secret perv. Maka is possibly even more of a perv. Black Star is Black Star. SOUL WANTS KIDS! (lol)

I think I love you xD

Or, if that's too awkward, your writing. 3333
awolfofredmoon chapter 17 . 5/19/2010
when i read this i think the term smut doesnt or shouldnt apply to your story (live journal included) this story has some thing alot of others dont class

the story is rated M for a reason and the fact is you have held back and approached the characters being physical with a weight or gravity of the severity of what they wanted and what they where doing you put the point in that they are both virgin and that they both have something special to begin with

i do hope for an up date soon

(and sorry for being a lurker for a small but)
BedknobsAndLlamas chapter 17 . 5/17/2010
I love this story, I hope to god you update soon coz i just cant get enought of it. totaly read the live journal bit to...very nice :D
ryuusadesu chapter 17 . 5/16/2010
I think I'm in love with you. lol... I can't write in present tense for the love of me
nightdhade chapter 1 . 5/15/2010

I know how you feel Maka, Boy do I know _

This is very well done. The reactions are perfect and you got Soul's thoughts to a tee,

I liked it a lot :3
Zephyr.Camida chapter 17 . 5/14/2010
...O_O Holy SHIT! That was the hottest SoMa and probably

one of the hottest smutty scenes I've ever read. And I've

read a lot. 3 I love hot you started the chapter with

'He's exceedingly pleased.' and ended it with 'She's exceedingly

pleased.' Oh yes, I'm sure they both are. 8D I really hope you

write a chapter with her receiving some love too. Heh.

You, my dear, have writing talents that surpass many others.

Keep up the AWESOME job, and I look forward to the next chapters!
Zephyr.Camida chapter 14 . 5/14/2010
Oh boy. I'd say this is the best chapter yet! Or maybe

my perverted mind is just -waiting- for the 'action' to commence.

Ahhhh, that tension. Your writing just draws me in further and

further. I'm sad to see there are only a couple chapters left

that have been posted. XD You look like you update rather

frequently, so it's all good. On to the next chapter!
Zephyr.Camida chapter 9 . 5/14/2010
All I gotta say, is that you do sexual tension VERY. WELL.

Interactions are of course masterfully done!~ I can't wait until

more heated things start happening. Maka won't survive. XD
Zephyr.Camida chapter 6 . 5/14/2010
Just needed to say I as soon as those "chocolate-covered" cashews

entered her mouth, I burst into silent giggles. Silent because

it's 3am and there are people sleeping. Damn you funny! XD The

arguing made me giggle...and the mention of chocolate covered

cashews made me want chocolate covered...nuts? XD
Zephyr.Camida chapter 4 . 5/14/2010
Ooooh, these last couple chapters were very cute. I feel

sympathy for Soul right now...him and his seemingly uncontrollable

arousals. XD Your descriptive writing really gets me...usually

overdone descriptions on what's going on sometimes can be too

overbearing and takes away from the easygoing flow. But you got

it evenly balanced, and I'm just smoothly reading and picturing

it all in my head. Very nice~

I'll make a point to review every couple chapters...I get a little

too excited to get the next one so it's a delayed reaction of sorts. Lol
Zephyr.Camida chapter 1 . 5/14/2010
Wow! I can't believe you are calling your writing crap!

This was an amazing first chapter! I think you portrayed

Soul's skittering emotions very well and I even was starting

to panic about what was going on. ; . ; You should really give

yourself much more credit, your writing style is very eye catching;

at least to me it is~

I am excited to
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