|Reviews for a changing life|
| Edhla chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
Disclaimer: I know this fic is pretty old, but I'm going to review it anyway :)
This is a good idea for a fic, and Christina is an interesting character. However, the paragraphs are really long and there are a few issues with spelling, punctuation, grammar and formatting that I think may be preventing people from giving this fic a go.
Do you have a beta reader? I have four, they're great and I recommend them :) You can find one my asking around or by searching on the "beta readers" tab above.
Keep writing, and good luck xx