Reviews for A birthday smile for the dark prince
Guest chapter 1 . 8/30/2013
Nice story . Could you do Vancha's next time ?
Elenafromthewoods chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
Hmm, it's a good start. Try to make more and realistic character changes, and maybe a little more descriptions? Also, a story gets better if you have a little sidekicks in it other than the main plot.

roxypony chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Thanks :D your submission has been counted!

ferretgirlsz chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
Aww, so cute. Loved it!
Duchess of Decorum chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
This is great much, much better than my stories, love if you could read them and let me know how to improve, thx