Reviews for Breaking out of the Closet
Vani Jane chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
The fact that America had known it was coming all this time made me LOL. It was quite a touching moment, if I may - only, England was really stuck inside a closet. XD

I frickin' love this, dude. Write more, please. :3 And thank you!

-Vani Jane-
herototherescue chapter 1 . 4/3/2011
HIGH-larious.

:D
Cherri Snow chapter 1 . 3/3/2011
XDDD

I grinned like an idiot (or America XD) at the whole "coming out of the closet" joke. X3
Lunatear chapter 1 . 1/19/2011
Teehee this story was brilliant ;)! Oh loved it so much! Poor iggy Alfred never gonna let this one go!
Victoria Bells chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Oh... oh my gosh. :'D Yeah, this is freaking hilarious. x3

I especially liked these lines:

[Plus, the bastard knew how to break into his house.

He never thought he would actually be grateful for that.]

And these ones:

[England absentmindedly started sifting through the hatbox he had taken to using as a seat, and half-heartedly pulled out a black top hat. With a cocked eyebrow he carefully placed it on his head and tilted it to the side.

"Hm. Why haven't I worn this yet?"]

I don't even know why I find that one so funny. :'D It's just so random. x3;; He totally should have still been wearing it after he broke out of the closet.

I also liked the part about the lawn gnome. Bahaha, Rupert. x3;; And the liberal use of expletives made it even funnier. :D

But I literally lol'd so many times at this. You're kind of awesome. :3
english teabags lol chapter 1 . 11/15/2010
"let's see what we have here"

"it's a door"

good LORD i laughed so hard. you simply must make more fics like these, i chuckled for minutes after reading
Yumi-chan-likes-chainsaws chapter 1 . 10/29/2010
Oh closets, both metaphorial and literal...so awesome to make fun of!
dragonheart3 chapter 1 . 10/2/2010
HAHAHA!

"Hey, guess who just came out of the closet?" LITERALLY.

Aw, I love the setting in this story. England and America actually seem like good friends. I haven't actually read any stories like that. Hm. Weird. I'm a USUK fan, but I enjoyed this friendship thing.

Blah. /ramble
Arialies chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
frigging FUNNY! i can't stop laughing! love it! xDD nice concept. keep up the AMAZING job! xDD i must subscribe! :D
Italiangurlinamessedupworld chapter 1 . 9/1/2010
And that's how England came out of the closet. Pffffft. I had always wondered... and there's nothing wrong with Hershey's! Unless you get it wet, then it tastes horrible.

Keep writing.
bbissocute chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
Absolutely hilarious! You got those characters just right, excellent job. Loved every moment.
Cacow chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
OMG, I laughed sooo hard!

"…Can you imagine the next summit? Hey guys, guess who finally came out of the closet?"

"I hate you."

hehehe!
Sile the Reader chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Oh I loved this, it was hilarious. I must wonder though where did America get a truck, one of his army bases? Unless he had them airlift his truck from home? I also wondered if you were going to talk more about England's top hat but I guess not (top hat circa the Victorian Era

The closet double entendre was really well written. The humor of your stories is really good. I also liked how you made America a little OOC, it gave him depth and maturity, while also keeping him a little silly and in character. Nice job.
P. Cottontail chapter 1 . 7/11/2010
Haha! That was hilarious! Thanks for the laughs. :P
IchiWaZen chapter 1 . 7/5/2010
This is a really a lovely story.

I was laughing the whole time :)
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