Reviews for Empires of the Mind
RobinsFF chapter 17 . 10/17/2012
Loved this story! So creative and you really prove that a ton of smut- just for the sake of it- isn't needed in a truly great story! Thanks for sharing!
99 Red Balloons chapter 27 . 10/15/2012
I'd love to read about when Edward realized he was in love with Bella!
fthsit chapter 17 . 10/9/2012
Wow. I am amazed. This is an absolutely well written story and has an enticing plot. I read this under 12 hours, I just couldn't stop until I necessarily had to.

And I'm sure others have said it before but you should publish this as an original(If you want, anyway) Just remember to you know, completely taking the Twilight out of it. Really though, if this was a published book it would definitely be one of my favorites. Keep writing, because your words are an art; they're transcendent. :)
The Chartreuse Pimpernel chapter 27 . 9/30/2012
The Chartreuse Pimpernel chapter 13 . 9/30/2012
Don't... Hurt... The tiramisu. LOL
Adriana chapter 27 . 9/22/2012
I think this was a really good Story. I like the story's where Bella isn't the one being told what to do all the time by Edward.
Adriana chapter 2 . 9/21/2012
I think this chapter was really,Really good
DavidYurman chapter 7 . 8/24/2012
The confrontation wasn't so bad!
DavidYurman chapter 6 . 8/23/2012
How incredible is it that she can levitate!
DavidYurman chapter 5 . 8/23/2012
She's very strong!
DavidYurman chapter 4 . 8/23/2012
Poor B, that's a lot to take in!
DavidYurman chapter 2 . 8/23/2012
I would be so spooked if I were in Bella's situation
DavidYurman chapter 3 . 8/23/2012
I love this Emmett!
DavidYurman chapter 1 . 8/23/2012
Very intriguing chapter!
Chileah chapter 27 . 8/7/2012
I hope you come back and finish this from Edwards point of view absolutely fabulous..
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