|Reviews for Empires of the Mind|
| VampireYouth chapter 2 . 3/24/2010
Loving this story. The supernatural AH is one of my favs. Your writing is great, it pulled me in from the beginning. One thing, you mentioned in chapter 1 that she had a year and a 1/2 left of High School, instead of school. Although I could have just read it wrong. It confused me in the beginning.
| nikkijoy chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
It's all getting more intriguing! Emmett and Jasper are going to have some fun teaching her I can see,lol. And what the hell is up Edwards ass? Sheesh, him and Rosalie are not so friendly are they?
Great chapter Hibbs and Natty! I cannott wait for the bad guys to show up and see what you have in store.
| majose chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Yeah, you definitely pulled it off. It was very interesting. Poor Bela being forced to live with a bunch of strangers that are not necessarily nice to her. Such a different Edward than the one from Sway. This one is kind of a douche.
| shell29bell chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Poor Bella! I'd be freaking out, too.
I have a weird feeling Carlisle and Esme are the man and woman helping to find her.
Looking forward to reading more ;)
| Navarre chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
I love the parallels to the Saga in regards to the gifts and the postion of the Volturi.
Bella would be a very formidable weapon indeed. I look forward to the training and what I hope will be offensive fighting, because the best defense is an offense. :)
I really enjoyed this chapter. Wonderfully fleshed out.
| lizf22 chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Very cool! Bella is an original! (and honestly I felt as naive as she did for a few minutes there)
Great job and you've given up plenty more to think about! xoxo
| midnite serenade chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Fantabulous! I love this chapter. As much as I am a sucker for B&E being all lovey dovey, I absolutely love when there's some antagonism between them. Bella's power is awesome. Your set up for the future of the story is great and it's magnificent how there is just enough reality in it to make this all at least almost plausible. Spectacular!
| carmelia chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Leave to it to Bella not just to have a simple power but a super power.
This was a great update. You're doing a great job developing the characters and their special abilities.
| rms33 chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
That was a fantastic chapter.
I can't wait for more.
| MyEdwardJacob chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
Edward is an asshole! Just looking at Bella it's easy to see she's an innocent inside and out. For him to just assume that she knows anything is stupid. If she knew all this she sure as shit wouldn't be moving in with them! If she knew her capabilities and that someone would manipulate her she would have disappeared or something. It's not like her gift isn't defensive. She could easily protect herself. If I was Bella though I would totally tell them to go to hell with the dropping of the shield thing cuz who would want to let anyone in to manipulate them? She should just practice on strengthening the shield not opening it. Edward and Rosalie need an ass whoopin! Poor Bella. All kinds of information being thrown at her and at the same time she's not really get the answers she needs. I would have left the moment they started treating me like crap and not answering my questions... But hey that's just me.
| natty dread chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
SO amazing that you did it! Four chapters in what - three weeks? That's pretty hardcore!
Wonderful chapter, as always! Can't wait for the readalong with Nikki! ( Iknow - I do occasionally end a sentence without exclamation marks...laughs) xoxoxo
| Raewright chapter 4 . 3/24/2010
I like the group dynamics so far!
| x123 chapter 3 . 3/22/2010
Interesting and intriguing concept.
I saw the thread for this story on twilighted and I am so glad I did, since I have never read anything like this before.
I especially like (and envy) Emmett’s ability. He’s often portrayed as a little dense, so this ability is really refreshing.
I am looking forward to following this story and finding out what exactly Bella is doing to Edward...
| devadasi7 chapter 3 . 3/21/2010
this is absolutely fascinating! i can't wait to see what happens next!
| Vican chapter 3 . 3/21/2010
Just found this story yesterday through the Twilighted thread, and god, am I glad I read it! I've recently started having a vast interest in the supernatural kind of stories, but it's kind of hard to find any good ones. This one however, looks very promising!
I love all their abilities; Emmett's was a real surprise - I've heard of all the other abilities, but not that one. I think it's cool that you took something that wasn't widely known and gave it to Emmett.
I also like that it seems as if Bella's shielding abilities are still going strong - that pressure in her chest that she can push back against, and the way both Jasper and now Edward have reacted when she did push back, are very interesting developments.
I really like this story - it seems as if you have really put some thought into the plot and the characters back story, and you certainly know how to establish characters and settings. It's a very enjoyable read, and I for one can't wait for the next update. It's going to be interesting to see how Edward will react to Bella, now that she caused him pain (is it wrong that I giggled while writing that? I'm evil).
Anyway, as I said: great story, great writing and great ideas. Thanks for writing this.