Reviews for Rupture
BlueDiamondRing chapter 22 . 11/30/2013
Sorry for what happened in your own life and glad you found your own worth and strength. My one sencere complaint with this story is that the facts and background of the characters weren't kept straight. For instance Jaspers last name went back and forth between Whitlock and Hale numerous times and that Alice was an after thought as a sister and never a mentioned about their mother Esme when it only mentioned their father had died.
nicole1962 chapter 22 . 10/20/2013
satan was not at the wedding:)))
ttandme69 chapter 22 . 10/19/2013
Great story...thanks for the hard work. Lisa
Postapocalypticdepository chapter 3 . 4/6/2013
Oh Bella, what have you gotten yourself into, girl?
I think someone needs to step in and help.
PAD.
Postapocalypticdepository chapter 2 . 4/6/2013
Damn girl, did you just take stupid pills?
Be careful Bella.
PAD
Postapocalypticdepository chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Usually first impressions are pretty accurate. Once a dreg, always a dreg.
PAD
hawkeye1958 chapter 3 . 2/11/2013
James is always an asshole, keep on writing
princessmichala chapter 18 . 1/11/2013
YOU GOT TO BE FREAKING KIDDING ME! :O
SHE CAN'T DIE, SHE HAS TWO KIDS AND EDWARD! FREAKING EDWARD, WHO CAN NOT FIGHT FOR HIM?!
sarahlouise80 chapter 1 . 8/1/2012
fab chapter.
debslmac chapter 22 . 7/25/2012
:):)
debslmac chapter 6 . 7/25/2012
:)
Kim Ginsberg chapter 22 . 7/12/2012
LMAO Jasper and Seth!
Kim Ginsberg chapter 21 . 7/12/2012
oh my, go bella
Kim Ginsberg chapter 20 . 7/12/2012
but will he stay in custody
Kim Ginsberg chapter 19 . 7/12/2012
I so called it a few ch ago!
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