|Reviews for Hell Over Heels|
| yoiyami chapter 8 . 10/4/2012
Yay, you updated! Nice chapter.
| AshesAshesLuna chapter 6 . 6/2/2011
Love it. Its amazinggg!
| Miami Blackheart chapter 6 . 8/21/2010
Interesting story. Like how it's unfolding.
A few wrong grammars and spellings though, but it's okay. :)
Can't wait how Suze and Rhea interact in the next chapter. Hahaha. I like how you write. Update soon!
| breathe-the-ocean-calls chapter 1 . 5/10/2010
Seriously dude this story rocks my socks :P
I hate how people read stories based on review number :(
Well I guess they're just missing out on your awesomeness :P
Brilliant just about sums all I've read up
| breathe-the-ocean-calls chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
Very interesting story line!
| breathe-the-ocean-calls chapter 3 . 5/10/2010
I love her character :)
Can't wait till her and Suze meet :P
| breathe-the-ocean-calls chapter 4 . 5/10/2010
What will happen next?
| breathe-the-ocean-calls chapter 5 . 5/10/2010
seriously really really well written!
can't wait till next time!
| I want to be Jesse's girl chapter 5 . 4/24/2010
Hey there, I would have reviewed every chapter...honestly, it I had the time I would write a big fat review for each of them coz trust me each chapter deserves one, and you ofcourse hun, deserve an applause for such a well written and entertaining piece
No doubt, there are slight errors here and there but still it's immaculate in it's deliverance specifically as it has all grounds - you know entertainment, drama, etc. One criticism though, just attempt to be more concise - sometimes (very rarely) I have found myself somewhat confused at the ongoings and ofcourse that is part of the proceedings (i.e. the fic) but I find myself having to refer back to a previous paragraph, etc. Another than that, it's quite remarkable especially considering - and this ofcourse is a presumption on my part - that you are at the initial stages of writing...either a few months to a year - please feel free to correct me if I'm wrong...
Anyways onto the actual story itself, Rhea, an interesting character, a cross between Suze and yourself...or so my instinct tell me. Ofcourse, your characters are quite good in that they conform to Cabot's (ofcourse this is only in reference to the characters you have borrowed from the Mediator) series.
And ofcourse it takes a unique sort of path - I don't think I have come across a fic that explores the reasons behind why Suze, etc. are mediators...and the fact that the main character is kick ass and an invention of your own - although she has a slight take on Suze although I somewhat believe that she has more links to you than Suze - which ofcourse means that you share similar traits with Susie Q...
Anyways exciting, exciting - Jesse is alive and well, Paul is still a naughty boy, the hottest jerk of the century and Father D is still his kind hearted self - and ofcourse this befits our favourite boys from the series...so kudos.
Ohh and ofcourse the cliff hanger...presumably Rhea will be meeting Suze soon, if not in the next chapter than in the chapter after or the chapter after that or the chapter after that chapter, etc. etc. - I love going around in circles - a tendency that I may have picked up from my uni lecturers...so unfortunately I don't quite befit your teen audience - well I'm still technically 19 years old although in about 2 weeks, I will be rid of the teen label...which I doubt will feel all that different - ages just meld together don't they? Till your about 13 supposedly the beginning of a new era, then it's 16, then supposedly 18 - well here in Australia your considered a legal adult and finally the age of global consensus - 21 where your recognized fully as a legal adult...how sweet. And then you have to wait for the grand 30 to officially be bottom low and then it's 40 - for the new 20 and then ofcourse the lovely 50 - half a century...but I think I'm bored you enough crapping about ages? God, sorry I do have a tendency to ramble.
Ohh by the way, I have to mention Jane - you know a bit of an uptight girl but I like her, sort of. Although she does throw tantrum likes a mum with an annoying kid - i.e. the silent treatment and the evil glare...
Anyways hope I haven't bored you to death with my review...the conclusion ofcours being that your fic is utterly lovely and my dear self would love to see more...although unfortunately I have very limited time this year - otherwise I would be aboard reviewing every single chapter for this fic coz it truly deserves it
Anyways gal, great going...totally and utterly love it and look forward to reading more...technically ofcourse I should be reading material from uni but blame it on the freaking academics whose grammar may be perfect but as far as skills go, writing or so I'm found is often not their style...
Alright good ridden...I better go catch a bit of a snooze considering I barely got any sleep last night and it's already about 10:30 which usually I wouldn't be fussed about but unfortunately, everything seems to be piling on and sleep seems to be a luxury that I can't quite afford - once you hit that lovely 3rd year of uni it all comes crashing down like a bucket of water...
BTW this story is added to my favourite list too
| yoiyami chapter 5 . 4/22/2010
Awesome chapter. Can't wait to see what happens when they meet.
| Pandagirl66 chapter 5 . 4/22/2010
LOVED it! That was so great. Lol, annoy-o-thon. They should make that an official sport. seriously. that chapter was superbly hilarious, and I'm glad we're finally getting somewhere with the Rhea meeting Suze thingy. Are they gonna meet eachother mext chapter? very much hope so. anyway, though it took you awhile, i would have to say this is your best chapter yet, completely great. thanks! :D
| CrazyLittleMilkshakeMonster chapter 4 . 4/15/2010
I really like this story.
I just have to ask, who exactly is Mark? Just a randommer?
And also, please can you go back to Rheas (or whatever her name is)'s POV, i prefer hers :D
Update Update Please :D
| yoiyami chapter 4 . 4/4/2010
This is a good story. Can't wait to see what happens next.
| Pandagirl66 chapter 4 . 4/3/2010
awesomeness! It's nice havi ng some suze :D. Thanks for FINALY updating, it wa s acery cool chapter. That dream actually scared me, very good job. I liked the cookies, but muffins are good too.
Oh, and I must answer your question, of course:
| Pandagirl66 chapter 3 . 3/17/2010
Very great! lol, that Sister Ernistine...:)I cant wait for Suze to show up, update soon.