Reviews for My First Love's Children
N of Kumo chapter 15 . 1/14
this fanfic is hilarious! and also mystery
AnimeLuver chapter 15 . 1/3
Plz plz plzzzzzz update ur leaving me on the edge
Guest chapter 15 . 11/29/2015
I can't wait to now what happen next .. plz update fast
Asunori Sauki chapter 15 . 11/10/2015
please update I like it so much...
Asunori Sauki chapter 3 . 11/1/2015
maybe I will like the next chapter...

not that I say that I don't like...lol
Asunori Sauki chapter 2 . 11/1/2015
do reviews encourage you to write or something ...

writing a story is from the imagination and feelings not ...

from reviews ... lol...
Asunori Sauki chapter 1 . 11/1/2015
the like when sakura cry ... she don't need too cry at ...
that's what I think...
Guest chapter 15 . 9/4/2015
Update please :(
I chapter 3 . 6/27/2015
Omg naruto
Zz chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
Are you going to finish the the story after chapter 15
Guest chapter 8 . 5/12/2015
amazing but i thought he was 5
Eva chapter 15 . 4/8/2015
Wow! I just read all of your chapter and I love SASUSAKU! I love your imagination. I swear you are a great writer. I hope you make more chapters!
Guest chapter 15 . 2/14/2015
Hurry up with da story plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz i love da story keep up the good work i literally begging u to write some more pretty please with a cherry on top :))))))) i literally love da story plz plz continue it 3 u and ur stories
o0Scarlett0o chapter 15 . 11/6/2014
do moooore it ended too fast ::
and also wtf happens with Karin Vs Sakura XD
You should have them fighting outside city :3
Guest chapter 15 . 8/19/2014
I want more. The book touched my heart dearly
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