Reviews for My First Love's Children
Guest chapter 15 . 12/26/2017
It was nice but please update
Guest chapter 7 . 4/2/2017
20 yen
Gahhhhhh chapter 15 . 1/26/2017
The plot sucks and uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...
If you're gonna publish a story online, at least improve your writing style. Kk?
Guest chapter 2 . 11/24/2016
Love it.,i really love sakura and sasuke
Guest chapter 1 . 11/24/2016
I love it..
xXSeiyalovesSesshomaruXx chapter 5 . 8/12/2016
Just a quick review before I forget. So far in the chapters I seen a bit contradiction and wasn't sure if anyone else brought it to your attention or not but you listed Sakura's children as 5 yrs old and Hyosuke proclaims to Sasuke that he is 3 yrs old... and how the kids don't know who their father is but in text you mentioned how the child (don't remember which one) mentioned they were talking to their dad...

contradictions get a little confusing.

Love the fanfic so far though just though I would point this out and go from there.
lekers chapter 15 . 3/29/2016
Please please please update this story soon!
Zabi chapter 15 . 3/27/2016
Where are more chapters? :(
nekochanlover69 chapter 1 . 3/16/2016
karin you bitch
Unknown chapter 1 . 3/8/2016
Fantastic best story yet
BookLover12 chapter 12 . 3/3/2016
Didn't you say that these kids were 5 years old? Why are they now 3?
BookLover12 chapter 4 . 3/2/2016
Fantastic series, I love it all! The awkwardness, the ignorance it's an amazing series. Definitely recommending this to my friends.
BookLover12 chapter 1 . 3/2/2016
Nice hook but pregnancy actually cannot be found the day after "it". That is because the sperm is still trying to fertilize the egg, thus a pregnancy test should be showing nothing the morning after. Cause Sakura isn't pregnant yet.
Guest chapter 15 . 2/14/2016
What happens next :o
Hilda-Sama chapter 15 . 2/10/2016
Make MORE!
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