|Reviews for My First Love's Children|
| xXSeiyalovesSesshomaruXx chapter 5 . 8/12
Just a quick review before I forget. So far in the chapters I seen a bit contradiction and wasn't sure if anyone else brought it to your attention or not but you listed Sakura's children as 5 yrs old and Hyosuke proclaims to Sasuke that he is 3 yrs old... and how the kids don't know who their father is but in text you mentioned how the child (don't remember which one) mentioned they were talking to their dad...
contradictions get a little confusing.
Love the fanfic so far though just though I would point this out and go from there.
| lekers chapter 15 . 3/29
Please please please update this story soon!
| Zabi chapter 15 . 3/27
Where are more chapters? :(
| nekochanlover69 chapter 1 . 3/16
karin you bitch
| Unknown chapter 1 . 3/8
Fantastic best story yet
| BookLover12 chapter 12 . 3/3
Didn't you say that these kids were 5 years old? Why are they now 3?
| BookLover12 chapter 4 . 3/2
Fantastic series, I love it all! The awkwardness, the ignorance it's an amazing series. Definitely recommending this to my friends.
| BookLover12 chapter 1 . 3/2
Nice hook but pregnancy actually cannot be found the day after "it". That is because the sperm is still trying to fertilize the egg, thus a pregnancy test should be showing nothing the morning after. Cause Sakura isn't pregnant yet.
| Guest chapter 15 . 2/14
What happens next :o
| Anime Trashes chapter 15 . 2/10
| BOOMBAYAH chapter 15 . 1/14
this fanfic is hilarious! and also mystery
| AnimeLuver chapter 15 . 1/3
Plz plz plzzzzzz update ur leaving me on the edge
| Guest chapter 15 . 11/29/2015
I can't wait to now what happen next .. plz update fast
| Asunori Sauki chapter 15 . 11/10/2015
please update I like it so much...
| Asunori Sauki chapter 3 . 11/1/2015
maybe I will like the next chapter...
not that I say that I don't like...lol