Reviews for My First Love's Children
Asunori Sauki chapter 15 . 11/10
please update I like it so much...
Asunori Sauki chapter 3 . 11/1
maybe I will like the next chapter...

not that I say that I don't
Asunori Sauki chapter 2 . 11/1
do reviews encourage you to write or something ...

writing a story is from the imagination and feelings not ...

from reviews ... lol...
Asunori Sauki chapter 1 . 11/1
the like when sakura cry ... she don't need too cry at ...
that's what I think...
Guest chapter 15 . 9/4
Update please :(
I chapter 3 . 6/27
Omg naruto
Zz chapter 1 . 6/11
Are you going to finish the the story after chapter 15
Guest chapter 8 . 5/12
amazing but i thought he was 5
Eva chapter 15 . 4/8
Wow! I just read all of your chapter and I love SASUSAKU! I love your imagination. I swear you are a great writer. I hope you make more chapters!
Guest chapter 15 . 2/14
Hurry up with da story plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz i love da story keep up the good work i literally begging u to write some more pretty please with a cherry on top :))))))) i literally love da story plz plz continue it 3 u and ur stories
o0Scarlett0o chapter 15 . 11/6/2014
do moooore it ended too fast ::
and also wtf happens with Karin Vs Sakura XD
You should have them fighting outside city :3
Guest chapter 15 . 8/19/2014
I want more. The book touched my heart dearly
hama431 chapter 15 . 8/4/2014
Sasukebiggestfan chapter 15 . 7/26/2014
No no no u haven't updated in a long time u can't just stop I hope u get better plz keep writing I love this story come on right more I love this story this is my favorite fanfic and it can't stop here plz keep writing I just can't bare to see it end right here
Sasukebiggestfan chapter 11 . 7/26/2014
No the story is ending
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