Is Bella's Prince out there somewhere? Did he save Charlie? I understand the number of flowers...days until Christmas...but why red roses and why was there a bud put in Charlie's pocket?

I am enjoying the way you are telling this tale. Love the drama, mystery and suspense!

I loved your take on the fairy tale, and also the way you painted Renee, who often gets a raw deal. Was very surprised to see that you wrote "This is the way the world ends", that story really stayed with me after reading it too - you're an amazing writer!

I'm so glad you finally posted this to FF so I could tell you how much I absolutely loved it! And what a surprise that you also wrote one of my favorite pieces for the SoOD contest. You are a tremendous writer.

Great story - very creative.

This story was very cute and a fun read! Thanks for going to the effort of writing and sharing!

I enjoyed this story very much. Loved your writing style.

Oh! This is so lovely! I LOVE how you wove the fairytales into a story set in modern times. I love your writing style and how you described Edward's pain and loneliness. Often times authors would resort to writing in first person EPOV in order to expose his pain but you did a fantastic job here without that writing crutch! No need to wax poetry about the depth of his emotions - simple and straight forward glimpse into his actions and words is more than enough. Thank you for this lovely story. :D

Ahhhh. It's over :( I was so into that I could have just kept reading and reading. Sorry to see it end.

Nicely done!

So sad to see it end :-(.

This was a wonderful story. I too like Beauty and the Beast and you did a great job of moving it to the Twilight genre. Thank you!

So she sees him now...I wonder who the visitor is...Alice, maybe? Although that single phrase didn't sound like her. Can't wait to find out! Good thing I don't have to...wait, that is. Oh how I love completed stories!

You want to grab her and say, "come on Bella, connect the dots!". Of course, we do have a little more insight than she does ;-).

I love the way you weave this tale.

Of course our girl would go to him...

Ffun story, very well written. Thanks

You've got me interested- looking forward to more.

Does Charlie really think he will keep her safe by sending her out of state? I guess we will see...

it was lovely! thanksvfor sharing!