|Reviews for Ruinous|
| Xynth chapter 4 . 9/19/2010
Extremely interesting idea, and one that I'm FAR more familiar with than the other one I reviewed tonight. I love how you've changed the tone of each and every chapter, how Ron's inner monologue has shifted from God to God. Since the Fifth God hates the other Four, I'm assuming the one whose name shall remain unknown is a follower of Chaos Undivided, and I honestly would love to see how you'd write that. Hopefully you'll continue this, keep up the great work!
| madnarutofan chapter 4 . 9/14/2010
I finally got around to reading this since , frankly, everything you touch is gold, lol. ... and this is the same. I would gladly trade you a thousand camels for the last chapter of this short-story!
| dymani chapter 3 . 9/4/2010
Awesome stroy please update soon
| AbyssalDaemon chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
Despite the distaste that Ron showed in chapter 1 of this, he really could be a spokesman for Chaos in this chapter. He manages to spin it in a positive light and made the gods sound quite likeable. Though given how contradictory Chaos Undivided, the remaining Chaos gods are that's understandable.
| Tsumibito-En chapter 4 . 7/10/2010
Wow...I mean wow this is really great. but Im really wondering will you make it that ron stays with kim or goes back with the others. In my honest opinion you should really go with the second. as much as I like kim a new twist would be refreshing change over the kim and ron together forever scenario. and I gotta love all your works it really gives you a new perspective on things.
| TheRedKommie chapter 4 . 5/27/2010
Being a fan of Warhammer 40K (Dawn of War games, Novels, the RPGs) I have to say this is a really good take on the four aspects of the Chaos Gods. I really do look forward to see what else you have planned here with Ron, his Twin and KP. Keep it up!
| Ano chapter 1 . 5/23/2010
The only flaw with this story? It REALLY needs page breaks or some form of dividing the scene changes, it messes with the flow of reading. Other than that though, a perfect gem of a story.
| xandman2002 chapter 4 . 5/21/2010
Love how the series is going and how you're showing the Ruinous powers in a "real world" setting.
You're have me wondering if both Ron and and the fifth member ar both Chaos undivived, if so I cannot wait for the next part.
Keep up th great work.
| CajunBear73 chapter 4 . 5/21/2010
Oh boy, this Prom's gonna be So the Drama...
| whitem chapter 4 . 5/21/2010
umm... what can I say but wow...
Though I know nothing of the cross over/fusion you speak of with Kim Possible here, I have been pulled into this story hook line and sinker!
Guess I've always been a sucker for the old Gods, and that's probably why I liked Stephen Kings IT so much.
Anyways, I can't wait to see what happens next, though I think I may have an inkling. I'll wait and see if my thoughts coincide with your ideas in the next chapter.
| Brother Bludgeon chapter 4 . 5/20/2010
Beautiful role-reversal right at the end, I have to say that first. No giant cacti, but still a great Kim and Ron "I LIKE YOU like you" moment. Please don't ruin it by having Ron reject her, or I may be forced to go chaotic on you.
I think I see the playing field a bit more clearly now. The six of them were, in the eyes of the gods, empty cups. Four were closed off, made small by the circumstances of life, and so they were filled only by those who were best suited. They couldn't hold much, but they got what they wanted, what they thought they needed.
But there were two little boys who, while just as empty, were not so closed off. One, the son of an archaeologist, exposed to the idea that the world was a place of mysteries to uncover. The other...
A blond kid full of the power of imagination.
Well done. I really like the writing kick you seem to be on.
| Unheard Flipper chapter 4 . 5/20/2010
Ahhhh, Grandfather Nurgle. If there is one of the Chaos Gods I actually like it would have to be Nurgle, because unlike the other gods, he actually cares for his 'children.'
But I'm wondering is why don't you have the division in the Gods, You know how Slaanesh and Khorne are often at odds with each other?
I have to ask though, that does Ron realise the fact that although servants choose to worship the Gods freely, they become enslaved to the aspects of the Gods? Khorne for example wish only to kill, for it is through the blood of their enemies, that the Blood God becomes stronger. I haven't read much of the 40k fluff, but that is at least what I understand. If I'm wrong feel free to correct me as I only recently got into the game.
Anyway good chapter, I'm really impressed with the story so far and I can't wait to see what happens.
I hope Ron is able to come back from the Chaos Gods, and to worship the Emperor of Man like a good Imperial citizen.
| Kyuubi-Titan chapter 4 . 5/20/2010
And that was the best update so far. I wish this fic didn't have to end and I'm really looking forward to the next update. Also love Rons creation story for the gods. Mostly how while dark and primal also serve practical perposes. I think that has to be the best thing I've ever heard. I salute you sir.
| Delusional Fishies chapter 4 . 5/20/2010
I knew it. Chaos undivided.
| James W chapter 3 . 5/20/2010
Wow.. Pretty cool story so far. Looking forward to the next chapters.