Reviews for Running from the Past
piper10001 chapter 2 . 5/10/2010
awww the first chapter was sad but as usually you find a way to make it happy yay!(: lol yeah yeah i know im weird XD
piper10001 chapter 13 . 5/9/2010
another happy ending as always(: keep up the good work
TTAznGrl92 chapter 13 . 3/21/2010
Ghostwriter chapter 13 . 3/21/2010
Awesome job. Catch ya on the flip side.
Jeremy Shane chapter 13 . 3/21/2010
good chapter & more please
Jeremy Shane chapter 12 . 3/20/2010
good chapter & more please
Jeremy Shane chapter 11 . 3/19/2010
good chapter & more please
Jeremy Shane chapter 9 . 3/17/2010
good chapter & more please
HorseRidersHaveMoreFun chapter 5 . 3/16/2010
Okay, so was her mother shot or stabbed? Because in the first chapter you make it like she was shot with the 'bangs'. Then in this one, you say that she was stabbed. Might want to clarify that a bit.

Also, was she listening to something or watching it? Because if she was watching, she'd have DVDs. Listening it would be CDs and not tapes, especially if she was listening/watching on a laptop.
HorseRidersHaveMoreFun chapter 3 . 3/16/2010
I'm glad to see you picking an original (sorta) topic, but please get a beta reader.

While you may only want people telling you how good the story is, being a good author means that you accept the constructive criticism as well. You have a lot of grammar, spelling and punctuation errors. One of the biggest is how you use your quotation marks and where you are putting your punctuation. There are also times that you're confusing the use of some words such as: two (the number), to (a preposition used like this: We went to the store.), and too (which means also: He's going to Florida, too.)

Another one you mess up on a lot is their (which is a possessive pronoun: We are going to their house.), they're (the contraction of they are: They're going horseback riding tomorrow.) and there (a place or location: The car is parked over there.)

Stuff like this can make or break a multiple chapter story because after a while, your readers down't want to put up with all the errors. It slows down the flow of the story and can make it harder to follow.

Also, having multiple reviews from people that are only saying 'good chapter & more please' or 'great update keep it up' are not what I'd consider quality reviews.

Take the constructive criticism and learn from it. Spell check doesn't catch the errors I told you about with those words because, technically, the word is spelled correctly. It's just used improperly. That's why it's important to get a beta reader, especially one that really knows what they are doing.
RKF22 chapter 9 . 3/16/2010
great update kep it up
Jeremy Shane chapter 8 . 3/16/2010
good chapter & more please
RKF22 chapter 8 . 3/15/2010
great update keep it up
Jeremy Shane chapter 7 . 3/14/2010
good chapter & more please
Stop Dreaming chapter 7 . 3/13/2010
That was sweet, i'm looking forward to reading more :)
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