Reviews for Crumble
TheWammy'sHouseReject chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
amazing story, and a very nice ending, but i have a question. who's the girl?
Ghost Wulf chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
LOVE it! Poor Bakura. T_T

The loop you did with the beginning and ending was a very nice touch-bringing things full circle is always a good thing and it helps readers remember the beginning instead of just the end. Your description was EPIC for what was there (I know this was more of an emotional piece, which I'm totally good with because these kinds are my favorites). Speaking of emotion, it was awesomazing as well (neither awesome nor amazing quite lived up to the description I wanted, so, therefore, they have been combined into something better, as is my power as a wordsmith, mwah ha ha)! It had a build right at the end that made for a great ending. Kudos! Favs!
cdcase chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
Great one-shot! Made me sad, though-but I guess that's what it's supposed to do in the tragedy genre, huh?