Reviews for Being a Yakuza's Bride
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 23 . 4/19
You write good but I just can't get invested in their "relationship" if you couldn't tell by my ranting. Sasuke surviving lacked suspense and hope since you made it clear there'd be a sequel with him in it before hand though. Glad Gaara at least was still competent and killed that shit clod. Assuming he died from the gunshot. I won't be reading the sequel based on the detailed summary you gave. It just doesn't add up to me. They don't actually know each other so they can't be in real love, their so called relationship has been a farce so far in my eyes due to them not actually having one, so no I don't believe their "love" will survive though if you want them to have a happy ending they will even if it's illogical, and a cop suddenly fucking with an Uchiha makes no sense given all that crap that was said and implied about them throughout the story so if anything its probably a rookie cop who either is just going halfcocked and getting lucky or a crooked cop that either wants some extra money/power or is part of a rival gang that's got something against Sasuke. Either way it shouldn't even be an issue if the Uchiha influence is as big and far as had been said. And as to the independence thing, I'm not sure how controlling Sasuke will be and how much of it will be for Naruto's safety in response to the kidnapping that he went through and his position as a huge target to get to Sasuke but regardless it was going to happen and Naruto should have seen it coming from their previous conversations. Sasuke views him as something to own and never share. He's made THAT much clear. I hold no remorse and barely any pity for these idiots. And that includes Kyuubi. Why he let's Sasuke near his nephew after hearing of the molestations and almost rape I don't want to understand. Iruka and Gaara were super cool though. Best characters in the whole story. Lol.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 22 . 4/19
Uuuuuuugggggghhhhhhh! Maybe I'm an ice bitch? But I wasn't at all moved by their "heartfelt" reunion and "loving first time coupling" and words of endearment and yearning when before this shit started Naruto truly hated and disliked Sasuke only to later be confused by his body's reaction to him but still detesting the way Sasuke treated him like a sex object and a possession. Whereas Sasuke's obsession morphed into some sort of affection mixed with his possessiveness all while doing NOTHING to endear himself to Naruto or to earn his affection. And DAMMIT why does Gaara gotta be a cousin?! That's an interesting idea I haven't heard before and sounds like a great way for him to be close to Naruto and a cockblocker at the same time in some funny AU fanfic. But dammit Naruto I don't understand how you could've fallen for Sasuke like this. It'd make more sense if he tried to talk his uncle into getting Sasuke to stop stalking and molesting him or to just leave him alone; without hurting Sasuke as he is grateful for his attempt to save him. Naruto should be completely traumatized by all this shit that started from meeting Sasuke and be chopping at the bit to be away from it all in my opinion. Ah well, there's just one chapter left. Let's see what else the idiots are up to. Honestly dying by bullet from Orochimaru is just what Sasuke deserves for being the dumbass to let him go. I have no remorse.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 21 . 4/19
Naruto had better relaid everything fucking accurately and I almost can't believe that stupid fucking Uchiha did not kill that fucking rapist human trafficking piece of shit while he had him. Seriously? No time to kill him? It can be done after everything else is taken care of? Are you fucking high Sasuke or just that much of a fucking idiot?! There are a number of quick ways to kill him. If you wanted it done extra painfully and/or the clean up of a trail was the problem that's what the fuck you're men are for! You don't do that shit yourself you delegate. Gawd, so fucking irritating! And then lying by calling Naruto your lover. You've never had sex with him only gave him a couple of handjobs and bunch of kisses ALL of which he didn't want and tried to fight off. You're just a fucking persistent creep and he's your damn obsession. Not lover. Asshole. You never even bought him a drink let alone went on a date or even got honest consent while he had full control of his mental abilities. Side note your description of Kyuubi reminds me a lot of that one sexy red head dude from Utena. And he was very hot. And a sensual playboy.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 20 . 4/19
Huh. Anyways fuck Sasuke. Talking about "it's complicated" he's you're boss that sexually harrasses and demeans you. That's it. Personally I want more Gaara. He might be cool husband material. OH! And earlier there was that shit about him trusting Sasuke and it was more than just him being scared and looking for any help and comfort at all? I call bullshit cuz that's exactly what it was. Sasuke has given no reason to be so trusted and liked, let alone comforting. He's caused nothing but stress, fear, humiliation, rage, unwanted sexual stimulus, dehumanization, and unneeded confusion for Naruto since they met the more they are in contact with each other AND even from other people who are doing so due to his association with Sasuke as they'd have likely never met otherwise. I mean the one time or two he helped Naruto out or saved him, he immediately went to attack Naruto himself! And if I were Naruto I'd be extremely bitter over having two supposedly large families from both parents that apparently never wanted me to be born. Kyuubi's motives being unknown. And largely unwelcomed.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 19 . 4/19
Awesome shit Iruka got them connections yo! Orochimaru better be killed. His information is hardly useful and he has nothing more of value to give. Gato was killed for doing less to Naruto AND Sasuke still had quick access to him afterwards. Orochimaru did more, did worse, and made Naruto no longer in his reach for who knows how long as who knows what else is happening to him. As to "keeping his word" he could've been lying. Should've been. Hell he better be. You don't keep promises to worthless scum. Especially when that scum won't heed your warnings and will let likely turn on you or pull another shit stunt for being stupid enough to let it live.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 18 . 4/19
Does Gaara know Naruto?
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 12 . 4/19
Again. Helpless damsel. And yearning for Sasuke to save him.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 11 . 4/19
I don't like how quickly Naruto is liking and wanting Sasuke. Seriously, what is up with that in fanfics that are otherwise good? I can't be the only one able to shut down and ignore an attraction when the guy is a complete ass. Sure I may not get as much constant exposure as Naruto gets to the asshole but what I did get caused my dislike to grow to the point where the attraction disappeared in light of the asshole in question not being a suitable partner. And Naruto used to be a brawler he was in a gang, why hasn't he successfully cracked any of these rich bastards skulls? He shouldn't be such a weak damsel in distress all the time.
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 8 . 4/19
Soooo is Sakura gonna die? And is Neji gonna like Naruto too much to kill him?
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 7 . 4/18
Dammit Naruto! Tell iruka what happened and not only will he demand that you quit but he'll be calling the police!
SilentSnowLeopardNinja chapter 5 . 4/18
1. He better quit that job 2. He needs to tell his friends what happened. 3. I feel like he might turn suicidal because of all this. Especially if Sasuke persists like this.
ahans1b chapter 23 . 1/11
This story was amazing! Entertaining the entire time. Going to read the sequel now.
The Yaoi MatchMaker chapter 23 . 1/1
Please update. I love the story so much.
Shikome chapter 10 . 12/9/2016
Omygosh! Someone kill that bitch already. I'm just halfway reading this chapter and I already want to review because I want her dead. How dare she?
Great villain btw. Annoying and an idiot, love obsessed girl.
Shikome chapter 9 . 12/9/2016
Hm. At this point, I could say Neji and Naruto knew each other better compare to Sasuke and Naruto's. Naruto didn't really know anything about Sasuke. Yet. And Sasuke, I think he knew enough of Naruto because he investigated it? I think its written on Naruto's resume too xD. But they're not still comfortable. I hope in the next chapters Naruto and Sasuke will be comfortable and closer. Not just some playboy Sasuke and naive Naruto.
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