Reviews for Missing Color
Numbatstuff chapter 1 . 3/10/2010
I really, really like this. I think this is exactly how Jacob would have felt before, and then after he met Rachel. And i love the way it's written - Jacob lives for the most part inside his own head and this suits him perfectly. This sits so well with my view of them that it's scary! Great work - and i think you did well with the english (just one tiny thing - i think at the very end it should be "felt" rather than "felled"). Looking forward to reading more!
zexion-heart chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
3 Good