Reviews for Naruto the Zetsumei Musha
Guest chapter 4 . 5/31
Update please
BoomOnGames chapter 4 . 1/14
Good chapter really looking forward to reading the update once it gets posted
SkynardTLB chapter 4 . 9/13/2014
Dude right on!
uzuuchi007 chapter 4 . 6/16/2014
Nice
agitofang666 chapter 4 . 3/19/2014
the story is good but it has many downs first i don"t seem to see a plot... bro you got half gold if you make it right you got yourself gold... second you need quotations for speech i mean you know how many times i got confused? alot... third try to make the lemon scenes more deeper not just sex straight away you need to take time with those scenes fourth try to add how they met and set a relationship with a background i can give you more tips if you want but i request you to allow me to use your story and allow me to try to make it better i got many ideas if you want to hear them
shadowreaperzx24 chapter 4 . 3/15/2014
Is there gonna be more? If so please update faster!
BeautifulLotus chapter 4 . 3/10/2014
i want more
Dage chapter 4 . 2/28/2014
Has good possibilities but needs grammar fixes
uzamakinamikazesasuke chapter 4 . 8/12/2013
keep writing
StrongGuy159 chapter 4 . 7/20/2013
Cool story continue please.
Monosyllables chapter 4 . 7/7/2013
Can't wait for chapter 5
dax larson chapter 4 . 6/28/2013
this story is so cool please continue with the story thanks
Ursoulismine chapter 4 . 6/18/2013
Can't wait for it you better make it or ill eat your soul
redwolf23456 chapter 4 . 5/20/2013
great story so far
killer4853 chapter 4 . 5/17/2013
plez update
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