|Reviews for Safe Place to Hide|
| technoWriter15 chapter 1 . 8/23/2011
| LittleFrisk chapter 2 . 8/10/2011
wow wow wow wow this is my third time reading this story and it never gets old i lovvve it sooo much. Thank you Thank you Thank you for writing it.
| Miss Saryna chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
great story :]
| Peya Luna chapter 26 . 7/16/2010
nice ending, though im glad to read that therell be a sequel, im looking forward to learn more about her abilities - what was that green light-thingy? - and what will become of oak once he gets bigger, plus how will she cope in the long run with not having a normal life anymore...and maybe add something about levis past, like stumbling over his a#hole parents during a case.
| RiddleGirl7 chapter 26 . 7/15/2010
*gets up and claps*
Excellent job on your story! I've been reading it since the 23rd chapter and I got to say, it's pretty impressive.
Your plot and character development is great as well as you characters. I just loved them all...except for Trent...but he's the bad guy XD.
I look forward to reading your sequel and I can't wait!
| Peya Luna chapter 24 . 7/14/2010
somehow i can understand her, but shes jumping into this way too rushed, with no plan at all. it would have made more sense to look into abes books for potential weaknesses of naturewielders, or at least 'loan' some weapons from the bprd. speaking of not making sense, wouldnt a secret agency check their incoming mail, to make sure that no one sends a bomb or stuff? so how could trent send her that package, especial since the bureaus address isnt exactly listed in the phone-book
| Peya Luna chapter 22 . 7/6/2010
why am i not surprised that this a#hole is still causing trouble? honestly, just sending him away was stupid, they should have locked him up and throw away the key.
| Peya Luna chapter 21 . 7/4/2010
i so knew that he was bad! no wonder amelias mother fled before he could learn she was pregnant, she wanted to protect her child from that heartless monster!
| Peya Luna chapter 20 . 6/30/2010
O.O not one to take things slowly, is he? good thing levi is there to catch her...and im with amelia concerning her bad feeling, his whole outfit seems like a brown version of her inner self - but brown in plants means withered and death, a stark contrast to her lush green, as is the thorny vine to her rose-bracelet...i wonder if abe senses something off about him too - but then he wouldnt let amelia near him...
| Peya Luna chapter 19 . 6/24/2010
hm, i wonder if levi meeting hannah in his dreams has a special meaning...
| Peya Luna chapter 18 . 6/17/2010
i wonder why this ugly cousin of Godzilla is after her...and i so liked that felix stayed with her when levi was hurt, they comforted each other!
| Peya Luna chapter 17 . 6/2/2010
ok, not exactly much action in this chapter, but a little pause before the next thrilling/shocking developments is nice too. sadly i didnt know all of the plants - not much of a gardener, plus different names in different languages - however i recognized one of my personal favorites, the bleeding heart(or weeping heart in my mother tongue)also, i like how much levi cares for her, hes becoming a bit of a mother-hen ;-)
| Peya Luna chapter 16 . 5/28/2010
aww! that kiss was so sweet it was downright corny...but kinda nice too. as for the flowers, im not exactly a gardener either, but i would think with her gift she would be able to handle plants that most find difficult to raise, like orchids and stuff. also i can see her plants grow faster and more lush then normal, shell probably have a mini-jungle in no time - and felix will have a field day running updown the vines im really curious as to who her father is, especially seeing as her mom never mentioned him, neither towards angela nor abe. one would think that at the latest on her deathbed she would tell her daughter about him, if only something like 'that bastard left us when i was pregnant'...nope, i think hannah was more afraid of him, and maybe even tried to hide her pregnancyangelas existence from him
| Peya Luna chapter 15 . 5/21/2010
aww, arent those two cute...and im already so looking forward as to who/what her father is, maybe hes even the reason they were attacked by that thing at school - or did this beasty wanted to revenge his fallen buddy? btw, i have a tiny point of critique: during the whole attack you called the thing 'entity', which got a bit...boring/annoying. there are so many other possible words: monster, beast, thing, being, attacker,...a bit variety would be nice the next time. also, is it intentional that youve given no description whatsoever of the - so far - two monsters, aside from them being really big?
| Peya Luna chapter 14 . 5/17/2010
great chapter! manning was an a# like always, sending untrained teenagers out in the field(!), luckily nothing happened to them...i absolutely love that amelia transformed into her inner self during the fight, i generally have the feeling that shes just beginning to realize the true extent of her powers. also it was too cute how levi took care of her, and that felix basically told him to go for it ;-)