|Reviews for Exploring The Unknown|
| snow eopard chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
| NUNICHAN chapter 1 . 6/19/2010
Everything happened so quickly. But it was good. A little more insight on their feelings and such would be welcomed. I would like to read Jake's pov on the situation. This was short, but I sort of liked.
| Lori94 chapter 1 . 4/6/2010
That was nice! Liked it!
| INACTIVEACCOUNT243095 chapter 1 . 3/9/2010
while i think you're super cute and i appreciate your attempt, everything is wrong with this. the level of writing is elementary and awkward, and doesn't show either of the personalities or any description beyond the act itself and the sex.. it sounds so sterile and awkward, as if described not by bella who is participating in it, but by someone who is entirely unfamiliar with the act. their relationship and personalities didn't come across.. this could have been any couple, you just inserted their names.
| FuckShitUp chapter 1 . 3/8/2010
(Y) nice bby
3 lykes your first story. write some more. & u betta review mine when i puts it on here. ;)