|Reviews for Fate Anew|
| 16FangsofWrath chapter 1 . 6/17/2010
Great story so far. Excellent word choice and the pairing is one of my favorites. There isn't enough Soi Fon and Ichigo love out there. Keep it up!
| mfmxxx chapter 1 . 6/13/2010
Just found this and hope it's still being carried on.
About the arcs, etc, well you could have it like one storyline while in the beginning storyline per chapter, e.g. the memory of rain thing as a chapter, etc, and then split up the rescue in SS arc as you go?
Also, I like how you didn't forget that Soifon would be stronger than Rukia, thus giving him more Reitesu, but also, about her limiter, I thought that Ichigo recieved the cleaver blade when he called out Zangetsus name as that was the Shikai form? Not because of the ammount of power he has, also I thought the reason he didn't have Shikai was explained somewhere that he was using Rukia's reitesu, not his own or something.
I hope Soifon will have trust issues in this though, due to the whole Yoruichi thing, though I'm kind of curious on how you're going to have Kisuke/Yoruichi be brought into it, unless they doi it after she's taken back to SS and they explain to Ichigo the situation.
I hope Chad is used a little more in this, as his friendship with Ichigo was one of the coolest things imo, and how he said to the captain he came to help Ichigo most of all.
Also, perhaps have Ichigo open up to Soifon about his mothers death more than he did to Rukia if you need a point to turn their relationship before she goes back to the SS.
Lastly, is there a chance of the romance developing at a faster pace than the almost non-existent romance in the anime, as there seems to only be a one-sided crush from Orihime to Ichigo in that.
| EyeOfTheBlizzard chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
I like this. Replacing Rukia for someone else is a relatively novel concept, i believe. This is well written and at least attempts to explain how a captain class shinigami would get into the same situation that Rukia did, although the explainations are pretty weak considering what we know Byakuya did to Ichigo even while sealed, but no matter. I look foward to seeing you continue this fic.
Over and out.
| Infinite Freedom chapter 1 . 5/25/2010
I have to admit that for a story I picked on a whim I really like the looks of this. I am VERY curious to see how this will go.
| MKTerra chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
Yes. Yes. Yes. Yes! I approve. I wish for thee to update as soon as possible. I.E. fucking NOW! OM NOM NOM!
| mind liger chapter 1 . 5/9/2010
finally a good bleach fanfic, i can count on both hands and feet the number of good bleach fanfics and most of them are either one shots to short or crossovers or not even finished. are you going to have her actually train ichigo i have often wondered what would happen if he had a constant powerful trainer from the start of it till he went to henco mondo how powerful would he be by the time he went to resuce orihime.
| Nameless Flame Wielder chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
-sniffs- Smells like an epic in the making to me. Hope that you bring us a new chapter soon. I'm eager to see how Ichigo being so much more powerful early on and Soi Fon learning how humans are these days will affect the story.
| Orchamus chapter 1 . 3/31/2010
Not bad, doesn't seem like love at first sight, so objective achieved I guess.
| Izanagi7 chapter 1 . 3/30/2010
BRILLIANT! Congratulations on being the first one to think of this and also Thank You. I like Ichiruki but I prefer Ichisoi. And this is just a crazy idea I thought of while reading this story (only use it if it can be worked into the story, because I'm not quite sure how well this would work myself), sense Soi Fon dosn't have the body of a teenage girl like Rukia, Replace Ms. Ochi as Ichigo's teacher with Soi Fon instead of making her his class mate like Rukia.
| 54842 chapter 1 . 3/28/2010
Wow this is new, at first i thought you were only writing the first episode out which i thought was unoriginal but now i see why! I dont read many pure bleach stories mostly naru/bleach now since im pretty much done with all of the naruto stories on the site.. atleast the ones i like (im getting pickier and pickier as i read). Switching out rukia is HUGE i just hope that you can correctly butterfly it (by that i mean the butterfly effect) because if you dont youll lose the plot value... anyway i hope this becomes a long story!
p.s. sry if I ramble a lot...
| SAMPSON12187 chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
I'm sorry but I find it extremely hard to believe that a captain level shinigami would have any problems with such a minor level hollow, even with a limiter on.
The hollow would have been crushed to questions asked. It would have been more interesting to see the release of her sword or something awaken Ichigo's power, that would have made sense.
| RisingSilverDragon chapter 1 . 3/24/2010
Great story. I'm looking forward for the next chapter.
| Swanboy chapter 1 . 3/18/2010
Excellent work and im looking forward to the next chapter
| InuYasha'sReincarnation chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Great story so far. Can't wait to see how you take this. Soi Fon is my favorite female character, and I love seeing her paired with Ichigo.
I can't wait to see how you get her to act with the others in school. I would love to see her react with Tatsuki, seeing as both excel at hand-to-hand. I think they would be great friends. But that's what I hope for, but it's your story you take it how you want.
| ShadowGOUF chapter 1 . 3/13/2010
hey this story looks really good I hope to read more of it.