|Reviews for I'm Here for You|
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/27/2016
I find it interesting that you ask your readers to ignore grammatical and spelling errors. The point of writing a fictional story is to create a world the reader can get lost in. That's a difficult task when you can't even piece together a sentence correctly.
Perhaps readers pointing out errors of syntax, grammar, and spelling could help you improve overall as a writer.
Before I can comment on your storyline, I need to be able to respect the fact that you have the basic ability to write correctly. If you can't use verbs, tense, or other simple aspects of writing in a correct and deliberate manner, then you probably can't write an appealing story.
I understand that most readers on this forum are teenagers who don't hold the same esteem for a basic understanding of the English language and written word, but if you're making the effort to exhibit your writing in a public space, please at least follow the rules of the written word.
| Greekmytholgy chapter 11 . 6/20/2015
take the a out of twin
| Esme Cullen121 chapter 19 . 2/7/2015
this is so sad :(
| Guest chapter 19 . 10/16/2014
I liked the story. I wanted Tyler's mom to go to jail, too. I believe she is guilty of murder. She attacked Bella and the baby died. I would want her to spend significant time in prison, or doing five to 10 years in community service, plus she should have to pay damages. She would have to remember the child she killed, for the rest of her life.
| Guest chapter 6 . 5/13/2013
This is really good so far. I just wanted to say when you put that she "shook her head" it is a little confusing because that usually means no and "nodding her head" would mean yes. Other than that what I have read so far is really good
| 007007 chapter 19 . 7/31/2012
I think it was a great story
I am sorry about your cat.I have one and I love her very much so I hope you feel better so I didn't mind at all when you talked about your cat
Thank you for the great story:) !
| twilight-jemmett chapter 19 . 5/16/2011
| PurpleSkittles22 chapter 19 . 1/15/2011
I luved this story...! That was so good you have to make more Twilight stories like that.! that was the very best I could ever imagine...! You have made the best story about Twilight ever! Please write more stories just like that one! Plz plz plz plz plz plzmplz plz plz plz plz make more stories like that! I am begging you plz! Your biggest fan
| NannaRahRah chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
This story is truely an amazing story
| eeddwwaarrdiloveya chapter 13 . 11/27/2010
I think that etheir jacob or another one from the wolf pack raped her
| gemma loves edward chapter 19 . 10/29/2010
| gemma loves edward chapter 18 . 10/29/2010
Good Good gOOD
| twirob chapter 19 . 10/22/2010
great story i loved how you concluded it did laurant get killed?aro didnt know what was in edwards head cos he didnt look into his head only through alice thanks for tiying up the loose ends
| twirob chapter 15 . 10/22/2010
i was upset that you chose tyler but im glad you had victoria compel him
| twirob chapter 11 . 10/22/2010
it is an excellent story and well structured im glad you did edwards pov for that night thanks for sticking with it